Such dumb mc....till chapter 170 god....the world and the concept of bloodlines is good but the story development is so-so..and so is the character development till now...
Website : qidian chinaViews : 10.11millionRating : 9.2(1188)Chapters : 1250(approx) Status : completed Word count : 3.38million author level : great No of works : 7Disscussion : 963Year started : 2012Chinese title : 神煌
This novel is great in manny aspects, but if youcan't handle a immature/idiotic/retarded MC, I would steer away. I have read up to chapter 385, and the MC goes from actual development, and then suddenly all of it is lost, and you read about a retarded toddler, or a kindergardner who is close to being mentaly challanged. The main problem of this, is that we arereading about somone who is an *****, with experiance of war and blood and the harshness of the world, and at manny times throu the novel acknowlages this, ad actualy gives the illusion of maturing in increments. He goes from a mature responseble paragon for hes sect in the heat of the moment/some important times. To a dribbling gradeschooler with downs in about 0-100 in 0.001 sec flat. It is as if we are reading about two completly different people, and it only keeps on getting worse, he actualy becomes dumber in he's "moments" as the novel goes on. If you have problems reding about idiotic MC's who you doubt can even muster the intelligence to open a door, then this MC wil probably give you truble reading the novel.When it comes to world building, the world unfolds in a natural and even pace as cultivation levels or political things in the sect unfolds.
So first of this book is called great teacher system and well you would expect that in a book about a teacher there would be students that would be taught that's what the name promises but no, in 115 chapter we've seen the mc teach once and that's in chapter 15, where he teaches qi shengjia about his fist technique. In 115 chapter of a book called great TEACH the total of times something is taught is ONE... He spends a lot of time giving people massages and pointing out that they use the wrong cultivation manual but not even in the official lectures does he do more than pick out some random attending students and helps them breakthrough a bottleneck using his massaging technique. He doesn't give a lecture about a certain technique and how it exerts its power or how spirit runes work or something about how the body should be maintained during cultivation etc. all of those things are things he knows but doesn't teach because the author is to lazy to think up a rational system for these things. That raises the question why try to go with the teacher premise if you don't want to create a full world that you can explain? And lets not talk about the fact that the story set up is unbelievably similar to Library of heavens path which, by the way, is an even worse failure as book and is insufferably bad at being a book about a teacher. So we have a story that seems to be plagiarized, its better than the original but still, and it fails to execute the premise it builds the story upon. If you don't consider what it's supposed to be, it passes as a mediocre cultivation story with system.
no compelling story just some random side characters praising how awesome and mysterious the mc is .no proper explanation of the cheat just a brief outline . Since it takes place in modern world setting chinanumba1 sentiment will always be there and the racism. So I am out don't read this trash
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I found this type of book more interesting than the standard revenge fare. A slower read and pace but the story is engaging to me and I cannot wait to read more.
Another novel that past the paywall not only becomes worse, it's straight up unreadable
This story only gets more dark and more enjoyable the deeper you read, I cant help but toss back and forth waiting for more chapters for this story, pls dont drop it author and dont put it on haitus.
Well, the only thing i can say about this work is marvelous.There are only few novels that make me shiver when i'm reading them. Hope that this shiver will always be present when i'm reading this piece of art.
Dis novel is like Slice of life/ harem/ magicI really didn't like this novel. I've tried to, believe me, I've went up to the high 200s, dropped it multiple times just to come back to see if I was wrong and was met with more disappointment. Okay so let's start with the MC. He's a guy that died and then reincarnated into the body of a degenerate, royal prince of a clan that holds a lot of power. As a character, he is handsome af, is perfect in every way, but his only "downside" is that he is not used to romantic advances so he basically becomes thicc in the head like other JP MCs. Moving onto the supporting roles, we've got a **** ton of harem characters, like a lot of them. Every girl who he meets likes him in some way, even those who hated him likes him later. As for the guys, there are only two types, those who worship the ground he walks on and those who despise him though there is only 1 that fits into this category. The rest are forgotten like 5 chapters later. What I don't like about these characters are not tell fact that they are one dimensional, they all feel different, but here's the thing, they don't feel real. Much like drama students, everyone's interactions are heavily dramatic. I mean ffs, the students are giving each other names and are taking them seriously like "The Destroyer of Clubs" or "Princess". Trust me, as a high schooler none of us got time for that. We've either got homework, midterms, finals, actual work, making sure we get to class on time, etc that we are more worried about. We ain't got time for anything. And if you still don't believe me, here, lemme give an example. So there are 2 girls who are called the "Witches". They think of themselves as above everyone else and have like a crap ton of blackmail on the other students. These two face off against the MC and get absolutely just completely destroyed. Buuuuuutttttt the MC gives em a second chance, they repent and all that. The interaction between the MC and these twins are basically "okay, that other person exists, whatever I don't got time to bother em" and then like a hundred chapters later, their grand paps calls the MC to his home to thank him and makes them all friends because the MC "can't refuse" and the twins are hoping to be able to both date him simply because there is no one else in the school that is better. If that isn't enough evidence here's another scenario. One of the girls told MC she was gonna be the artist for his game. But she didn't want anyone else to know because she is secretly an ero artist. MC agrees to keep the secret and then when he goes back to like the main girls, he talks about the progress on his game. I **** you not, one of the other girls was able to "deduce" that the two we're most likely talking about the game and since the MC was missing an artist and musician, the other girl was most likely an ero artist since she wanted to keep it a secret. ??????????????wtf?So the characters, while unique, are fake after and I really can't get into it like that.ONTO THE STORY DEVELOPMENTRight off the bat, the story development is unpredictable, but just like character design, just because it is unique doesn't make it good. The story is very -convenient- you know? Okay so here are some examples. Our MC decides to stream for shits and giggles when his FIRST AND ONLY VIEWER that shows up is HIS SISTER FROM WHEN THE PREVIOUS GUY WAS A DEGENERATE. Okay you know, like 1 in a billion chance but that's like nothing in story telling. So how about that one time that when the MC started to delve deeper into magic, one of the regular girls thought that she didn't want to be left behind and so then the school magical spirit suddenly comes outta no where and grants her a mysterious egg that will hatch or something who knows, that will give her magical powers.??????? AND THEN, TO TOP IT ALL OFF, the student body president is like the princess of another magic clan and has some decent magic power, has like the previous president as a maid, who was also a magic user. So you're telling me that BOTH OF THEM did not notice this spirit the entire time they were enrolled there? Okay, so when their clan decided to send their kid to this school, they didn't check up on it?Enough about the story development, let's go onto the world background. It's pretty good, the story gave me like an info dump multiple times but I get the gist. Only problem I had was the author limiting the world to just Japan. Its like a lot of them forget there's a whole world out there. The author has told me about magic users inside of Japan, but what about outside? Considering how small Japan is to the rest of the world, it is quite convient how Japan (had) the strongest magic user in all of history and the only place that really existed +(the clan the MC is reincarnated into is also the descendents of this guy who may also be the reincarnation of the ancestor)Overall, it really feels like cleverly hidden escapism, 10/10 would review again
This novel is very good ,it is not a random cheap story that the writer has copied like most novels of the same genre.