Hey jewels, we are over fifty chapters and our journey is nearly ending. Drop a review if you enjoy the novel. I'll be glad and grateful for your unwavering love and support throughout my work. This is the hardest fantasy novel I've ever written. Love~twilight
ok, why does all the characters have white hair besides that good story
Are you a new author, because there is still quite number of things that you can improve. But, I appreciate your efforts but I improved from that point and I am still improving to become best version of myself.If you need any advice, you can comment here.Keep updating
The grammar is very bad. The story is OK though.
This is a system/game novel. And as the author told me, it isn't as horrifying as the cover so far.On the other hand, no idea what happened to the other x million humans overnight, assuming they aren't the monsters he's begun killing off. Basic structure is pretty good, grammar, spelling, and so on. Capitalization kind of comes and goes, but it doesn't interfer with the understanding. There's obviously much more to be explained about the world/dream/game than the first five chapters held.
Hello, this is the author, Yun Yin! (Insert shameless self-promotion here...)I am a new writer on Webnovel, and this is my first time writing a cultivation novel, so please leave behind any comments/criticisms, they will be very helpful!Enjoy! :)(Not actually stable in updates but.... T_T)
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The introduction is complete garbage. A A
This story is amazing and engaging and I frankly couldn’t put it down and still want more... I’d recommend this to anyone looking for a story with great characters good action some drama not too much and an MC that kicks ass
I’m here again, hoping that we can have a chance to work together and we are willing to pay you for distributing your work.The conditions should be generous. If you are interested, please contact me via this email:adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *）, then I should take this opportunity to discuss it with you in details.
What can i say I'm a fan of RSSG i love fanfics like this so.. Please continue this novel author or else.. *Slowly picks up handgun*
Seems interesting enough but it seriously needs an editor to help correct all the run-on sentences. The main character so far seems pretty dim witted as he wanders around like a tourist. Hopefully it will improve with time but who knows.