THIS IS TOTALLY PERFECT! . HIGH FIVE!! all r good n perfect for me. I'm honest! I just.. so suprised with the authors way writing! Nice♡ Well done, keep up the good work!also, i love the consistency of the updates!
.....honestly while reading this novel you would get the impression that it is a mash-up of different novels the difference is that the MC is not have an average appearance but below average downright ugly which is emphasized by the author time and time again and fast relationship intimacy progress, novels like "villainess butler
I'm writing review 1 because I can :p but other then that just to mention a few things I write this book because I've wanted to write a book for a long while now but have constantly told myself otherwise. Ive told myself that it would turn out bad or I would quickly get bored but I want to prove myself wrong. I have high motivation right now so chapter will be coming out quickly but at bare minimum I hope to at least get out 1 chapter a week
ok. this is a good story to me, and I like the bully girl x bullied boy plot. please don't drop this cause it's really good that I keep thinking on what happened to the characters.
..................HAIL CCP!!!..,..............................................................................................................
I have read 6 chapters. The story is developing well. Stability is good as already 17 chapters have been published. Character design is good. The characters, at the moment only 3 have been introduced. Pace is good. World background is the present time (before the Virus in Wuhan).Writing quality is good. I did notice a few grammatical mistakes, but these did not interfere with the reading of the story. There is an issue with tenses. Mistakes do happen and the writer may not be able to see them. I have started to run the draft through a grammar checker before posting it.The story seems to be a gaming story with all those figures appearing. It is different. All the best.
Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter....................................................................................................
Okay, so I found the book suddenly and wanted to give it a try and now I can't move on from it. Not only the plot is unique but the description are flawless. Specifically I like the characters' name so much. It's kinda unique and sounds so good. Overall, I want to appreciate the author for this masterpiece. Carry on
A long awaited story laced with an intriguing idea!If you're a sucker for tragedy romance or slice of life and romcoms, then this is for you.There's a balance between the sad scenes and the comedy scenes that enables readers to grow hooked on the series.?Do check out JC's stories! It's my friend's breakthrough into the realm of writing!
Overall the idea of your novel is good, I like all the characters, I like the mansion and the way you added grey color enhanced its beauty .Best of luck?
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