Another great and unique novel without any type of genre that I find unfavorable. The interaction between the characters is enjoyable and I really appreciate the simple and easy-to-understand writing style. However, the chapter's content is quite low but the updating rate is currently excellent so that balances everything I guess.
Semangat terus menulisnya! Diksi sudah bagus dan keren, cuma kendalanya masih kurang di kepenulisan.Salam kenal ?
Horrendously bad grammar. The writers English definitely is not fluent, but it seems like they don't do basic editing. The concepts of the story are pretty decent though.
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By looking at the synopsis and first chapter. I can see that MC got serious about the journey. Hope there will be good character development for this unique plot.
Writing quality - This is a 2. It's clear the author just wrote whatever nonsense that popped into his mind without reviewing it or editing. The grammar mistakes and poor sentencing structures quickly pile up leaving what has been written ineligible and hard to make sense of.Stability of updates - This is a 1. This may be unfair but I can't be bothered to check chapter dates. However, this novel has been in my library for a while now and there's barely more chaps than what was initially available. I feel that under no circumstances would update stability reach 3 or higher.Story development - This is a 2. The story as of C11 isn't anything special. The mc came from an orphanage then went to some sort military training thing.Character design - This is a 1. Most characters are background mobs with no explanation to their looks and end up being described as a collective group. The few times we do get distinctive explanations it's basically just something like: that guys's a dwarf. Not only that but we've only seen the personality types of 3 people and they've very basic.The mc is supposed to be cold and rational. He sees everyone as someone he might need to kill. However, he acts like a dumbass and is fine with staying weak even whilst considering how he might have to kill the strongest person in his group. He gets followed around by someone trying to act buddy buddy with him he initially thinks about how he wants to kill him but then out of the blue starts conversing with him as if he has accepted him as a friend.The 2nd character (can't remember name) is basically just described as a righteous goody 2 shoesThe 3rd character (can't remember name) basically just attaches himself to the mc and we're not given any reason why.World background - This is a 1. The background of the novel is very limited and from what I vaguely remember is kinda generic.
It’ s honestly terrible. Once you read the book, it was heading to a good start but you will soon find out that it went down hill. Shdshshshdhhdb
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Not sure why but can't get into this story.
Each chapter is less than 500 characters. Read a couple of chapters and nothing remotely interesting is happening.No world building, no character dept. The only thing that we know is his age and dream.Most of the chapters are like reading a movie script.My advice. Pour more effort in each chapter, make it longer, more meaningful.Your grammar is okey to read. Instead of making a list of things to do, make it him saying what he needs to do, why and a backup plan if that doesn't work out(Don't you make it like that in your head in your daily life ?)I will come back later, hope you fix the problems :)
I found a hidden gem, each chapter makes me laugh more than the previous one, I would have liked to have more chapters, but this novel deserves the wait, so thank you for having been able to translate this work ??
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