The characters are well written with diverse and interesting personalities. They undergo development too. His classmates are also very nice people who have thier own problems. They encourage and support each other, help them solve their problems. It feels nice to have someone to talk to and cheer you on, right? The interactions between characters is also nice to read.
More!!!!!!!!! I love this novel so much!!!!!
Amazing work! I’ll have to say: amazingly amazing
The world background is explained so we'll. While the story development is pretty superb, the plot was already set after 3 chapters or so. I haven't seen much of the characters aside from the mc and the girl who was making a coverWhat a cool and refreshing concept. I'll save my complete review when there are more chapters. Good luck!
Alright, Author here. I know most of you think this novel is a rip-off of Cultivation Chat Group. Well, to be informed, this novel was in the contest with the theme chat group. And this is the result of that. And please, I know you don't like weak MC but understand that the MC is never a magician to begin with, and does not have any experience becoming one so how could I explain him being able to defeat enemies easily? Cut him some slack because I can't just let him go to a strong individual with some cheat powers because the story would go boring too easily.As for the world-building, I didn't bother explaining where he was located or the current situation because it was set in modern Japan. Nothing to explain too much and I don't bother emphasize it too much since it will just be stocking words with only description of the place and I know many of you hate that.As for the chat group, its a necessary part of the story and it would be one of the key points in the future. As for goals of the MC, it's not yet decided so please wait for a bit. As for the grammar, I know I have mistakes here and there and I know that because I am not a Native English speaker so please tolerate it a bit and if there are mistakes, kindly point it to me. And as always, thank you for reading.
I don’t know if its just the earlier chapters but the way he talks is not refined for the thousands of lifes he lived and he didnt bother researching cultivation or any so called Immortal things in any of his life times or trying to break the cycle great idea poorly implemented
Fun and funnyhis thought process is kinda similar to a psychopath when damaging monsters lol_____________________________________________
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The first English translation of theKama Sutrawas privately printed in 1883 by the Orientalist SirRichard Francis Burton. He did not translate it, but did edit it to suit the Victorian British attitudes. The unedited translation was produced by the Indian scholarBhagwan Lal Indrajiwith the assistance of a student Shivaram Parshuram Bhide, under the guidance of Burton's friend, the Indian civil servantForster Fitzgerald Arbuthnot.[96]According to Wendy Doniger, the Burton version is a "flawed English translation" but influential as modern translators and abridged versions ofKamasutraeven in the Indian languages such as Hindi are re-translations of the Burton version, rather than the original Sanskrit manuscript.[94]
Despite having technical errors in the chapters, the author still was able to convey the premise of the story to me and elaborate it through character development, action-reaction, and conflict.I like how you incorporated first person perspective and having the balance of thought and plot. Many authors that tried to write like that often failed to convey such a simple premise. You did just fine.
Hello comrades its me the author and I hope you can give me a chance . And give Me tips about how to make this book better if you like the idea . please Ill go Fix all grammar mistakes Right now so please give me some tips . So I can make this book better please From : Author To: readers