The book is interesting and I love how it all started. this is a good fan-fic and I hope to read more... keep it up author. The sky's your limit
The story is awesome, but not to sound judgemental... I would have liked it more if you didn't describe more on what was happening. Like if it was a cliffhanging blurb.
Well,the book's all good all the way.
Come try this out, guys!
The bad thing is the chapters too short.. Need double the word count.. Overall the story is good.. Will be perfect with editor thou.. And i love baddas mc..
I love fantasi and Excellent story.This book from the beginning have a very catchy storyline. I would definitely recommend reading this one. Ganbatte.
Just two chapters and I want more. Please bring more updates. This one is going to my library[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Honestly, it's the best football story I've ever read on a webnovel. I'm even happier that mc started playing in 2012 and not in 2022 or 2023
ufff finish reading the novel as far as it goes and I can only say that it was what I was looking for so long I had not found a similar and the more I read the more I liked the author would continue to recommend this novel to those who like movies and books style the godfather and I hope that one day I'll post again.
Haven't read the story but from the sypnosis I knew it was gonna be good. So you better don't drop it! I will help you advertise your book and continue to support you. Hope you will have motivation to end it with a good ending! I will support you with all my stones!
Hello there, I am not so sure about this but I really find the MC to be a kinda cool and easy going person but it does not seem to complement his suicidal kind of nature except in cultivation. Kudos to the author.
So this is my second novel and is (in my opinion) the better of the the two. Please give me feedback as to what you think about it and what you wish to see. I have also read many novels and know the basic concerns of many readers.
If you any of you guys are wondering, my first novel is also in a state of incomplete and will be getting updated by me. However, I will be focusing on this novel more then my first. But if you would like to check it out, you can go to Wattpad and search for the book title, "The Lost Shadow", it will be under a similar pen name. If views on my other novel increase and it becomes something people start to like then I will continue that novel as well.
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Thanks guys.
I'm grateful, I'll do my best to improve.
Perfection ?⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️? . . .