the story is alright as if ch125, though it seems to be harem oriented.
It's me, Hi, I'm the problem, it me. ? I'm shy, but, here it goes. Authors don't expect high of me, ?From my perspective, the story, has a strong emotional and suspenseful foundation. The mystery surrounding Samantha’s disappearance, combined with supernatural undertones, creates an eerie and gripping atmosphere. Kathleen’s determination to uncover the truth adds emotional weight, making the story more than just a horror mystery—it’s also about friendship, loss, and the unknown. However, the effectiveness of the horror elements depends on how well tension is maintained.If the pacing is too fast, the suspense might not fully build, and if it’s too slow, it could lose momentum. Character depth, especially for Samantha and those connected to her, will be crucial in making the mystery feel impactful. Overall, it has strong potential as a psychological horror-thriller, especially if the eerie elements and character relationships are developed with care. ?okay, amma, hide now.
I Honeslty really like it but you need to fix the grammer, at some points I’m straight guessing what ur trying to write. Other than writing everything is dope hope the story continues for a while .
Hey there, apparently I can leave a second review! So, sadly didn't win anything in the recent WSA 2022 winners announcements but that's okay and this story'll continue for much longer with our beloved characters since we're also reaching 200 chapters!My other review has some guidelines and whatnot, so this is will be, an AMA! (Ask me anything) That is to do with the story, what's planned, anything extra about it, have you slept in the past 24hrs and all that, if you wanna ask, this will be here!I just wanna thank everyone who's reading so much! More interactions are always appreciated, comments, likes, etc. It puts a smile on my face and motivates me to write more and more; on top of the story I'm already going through in Arc 4. Gonna be some fun stuff coming up, even if the pacing is a little slower, there's a good reason for it!In any case, hope you have a good day, take care of yourself and happy readings~!
good book just the update time is so bad
"Oh boy. Snicka, you got a deep case of morning wood. And you came. Welcome to a new hell called puberty. I'm the N**ga to take care of you. They call me.... "
" embbhh biasa la ya udah pergi kerja! Kenapa emangny??"
Me:ok I am the supreme alpha and you are just alphas got it
"Good, and since you`ve agreed to it, I think I`ll now have a full excuse to train you to your fullest. I won`t accept a son-in-law who can`t defeat in a straight fight and is weaker than me." Alex watched how Millicas had gulped a little bit at this one, before Alex had smirked to him. "And if you think that you can back away from this one, I suggest you think again, because Illya and Sakura are both now taking the lessons in cooking and chores from Shuri Himejima, along from Akeno, so like it or not kid, but those two ladies are dead serious on marrying you. So, you`ve got your fate decided in one staying night by my girls already." Alex laughed at this one a little bit, as Millicas chuckled nervously, before Alex turned to look at Grayfia who was still patiently waiting for her little boy. "Millicas, go to you Mom. She has been worrying nonstop for you and it`s time to tell her everything. Take care of her and yourself, Millicas." Millicas nodded to Alexander, smiling to him and going back to his mother, as she accepted her son with a hug and a smile, listening to what he had to say to her.
Name: Ryou
"Ultimately, the greatest foe our order was formed to stand against the so called Great Darkness, a force often also called Ahriman... and it´s followers. It is... " he halted for a moment.
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