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It's rare to see a story where the MC apart from going back in time also gains special skills. Very interesting to wait. I hope it can be translated to the end. ☺#PositiveReview#SupportTranslator#SpecialReader#FinishTheBook#DontHiatus#GoodBook#HighQualityTranslationFollow my Tiktok : @douyin_land
Raw title: 网游之神级机械猎人Status: 2069 Chapters (Completed)....................................................................Author: 逆袭的马里奥............................................................
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*closes eyes, slowly nods head in acceptance, softly whispers..."yuh"*
Interesting idea, but the writing/ editing needs a bunch of work. Everything is choppy and makes it uncomfortable to read. When the author tries to describe things it becomes wordy, description is good, but it needs to make sense and not be so awkward.
Garbage waste of time Read the first 10 chapters and can’t stay interested in the storyHave no idea what the writer is trying to convey to the reader considering most readers don’t have a through knowledge of Chinese mythology Maybe the writer had an interesting idea and plot but unfortunately with weak start no one would stay and suffer to read it
its my first time review story and english is not my first languange.its story about immortal human that caught the eye of yandere goddess. its have potential to be great. but the mc is i dont know how to say it perfect ? bland? idealistic? good guy?.they trust each other so fast and it make the story bland. i expect at least the mc suspicious for the heroine and make misunderstanding action that make mc more suspicious with heroine and make the heroine love the mc more. or trying to break the marriage by many ways.like poor heroine with dominering ceo,general,etc novel but with gender reversal. maybe something like that to make the story better
honestly pretty good so far, the writing and grammer is excellent. I'll keep reading cause it's got an interesting plot. it is going to be interesting how you balance real life/game time because people need to work and eat. if you go offline for a few hours then days will go by
Literalmente, mi único problema con esta novela es lo horrible que es la gramática. Y con eso quiero decir que a veces puedes leer dos o tres párrafos sin ver nada malo, pero otras veces puedes leer un párrafo completo y tienes que reestructurarlo por completo para que tenga sentido. Si quisieras a esas personas a las que les gusta leer en piloto automático y realmente no les importa lo que lees y solo quieres algo para leer, diría que la gramática es perfecta ahora, pero si no, entonces yo
Latest chapter 100 and up are on MTL quality
I just started liking the novel but it stopped updating. does anyone know if the novel was drop or the author is just talking a break?........