Bro its getting better and better the more i read keep readin the book good work..................................
What do you think about this book how do you feel about it tell me post a review and tell me about it, New chapter coming out friday chapter 22 latest coming out on friday be patience and thank you for all your support every review counts.
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This book is in my opinion a masterpiece, the quality for the author, as an amat*ure, is amazing. With the majority of books on this site being either good grammar with a bad plot or bad grammar and a good plot, it is refreshing to see one with both positives.I love the idea he went for and the way in which the author has executed it, it is marvelous, and I wish that my own were of this quality.The update rate is very good and the chapters are long as well, which is always a plus. It is also refreshing to see non-2D side characters.
the history is funny and has a good quality of writing, but the frequency of updates is something that makes you onder if the history is even going to be uploaded again?
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Short but satisfying novel. It was like a breath of fresh air, I really loved it.The ending brought tears to my eyes - in a good way. I would suggest everyone to try it out. If you are looking for something enjoyable to read that is not too long, then give this one a go!
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This is a copied work from deathblade's translation. Please read it on original and not on qidian/webnovel.Qidian is trying to pressurize the WW by using such antics. That's very bad and we need to support the WW as they were one of the pioneer for the Chinese webnovel translations. Thanks
well i caught up with the story. the mc is meant to be o,p we get that, but the little things count. where did he learn alchemy?where did he learn so much about the world and other species? when did he learn to even fight? what books did he read? his clan basically only owns a town where the ancestor was basically a rogue cultivator before settling down 10k years he probably learned a lot but we never had a chance for us to see the mc at least tour the place just a baby who cultivated so when did he learn so much from? theres no slice of life its just a little lucky mfer with no context. i get its supposed to be a face slapping novel but the characters are just stupid he went there beating up everyone in 4 chapter long fights when he can obviously one shot them y? his goal is immortality so he wastes his time and energy on trash i dont get it. its just one face slap after another repeating theres no development or a real story its stupid. the world and the concept is the only reason im even still reading. and i believe the author even forgot the mc is a BABY. wheres all these punches and kicks comming from? its a baby it cant punch or kick hold a sword anything without being right in your face so you cant even imagine the actual fights thats one after another the moment the mc went to the mystic realm is where the story took a nosedive. before it was on track a BABY isnt fighting in a melee. a BABY isnt punching a kicking you. a BABY cannot hold a friggin spear. an OP BABY should be sitting back shooting lighting using the arrays using long ranged skills or using their brain not trying to fight people in a melee it just doesnt make sense. this doesnt deserve a 3, but its only giving that score because i rated high on translation and the stability of updates everything else is a 2 except the world background at 3
it's actually good, his disciples are all talented but why you always make so many idiot characters? aaarrrggggghhhh