Kary_KD
Lets hope, MC does not go on racism spree all over world.From the name alone it is interesting. First few chapters name are good. But more interesting it is, more worried I am. Chinese authors have chinese superiority syndrome in them. Lets see how this one goes.
It is a well written and enjoyable story. The side characters are good however the mc is written to be a little dense with the intention of being funny. Its worth a read if your undecided.
Read until chapter 86. (The last one released)Writing Quality: English is not my native language, so I don't have much basis for an opinion on that, but with my level of English I didn't find any errors that interfered with my reading.Update stability: Every day there is a new chapter, in addition to several extra chapters, I have nothing to complain about.Story development: At some points I feel it gets a little repetitive, sometimes the chapter is just about his routine with a slight difference from something that happened in one of his businesses, but the story is so satisfying that I don't prevented me from reading at all.Character Design: Looks a lot like anime character personalities to me, a lively girl, an ice cold older girl, a cute and loving younger sister. There's no way to complain.World Background: I loved how he presented the differences between the parallel world and our world, even explaining historical implications between the countries of the story world.In the end, a clean 5 Stars review.
This novel is so good, it makes my day..........................................................................................................
This FF is literally for prople Who knows nothing of naruto. There is so many plot holes I cant even read this shi. He’s so weak bruv. How are you an Otsusuki but cant handle your own ****n chaKra when your chakra passively increases your own strength? Like what? Imagine have so much chakra but cant even fight? The author said hIs mother was gonna train him jus for hIm to just learn about his clan. i dont really think that counts as training. Go actually watch the show and stop writing this nonsense.
Came looking for silver and found gold instead.................................................................. .....................
Honestly, while the writing isn't amazing, and the wording can sometimes be confusing, its a pretty good read. It's interesting and has a cool story. I think it will get better as the story moves on. Can't wait till it gets to the start of the apocalypse, the MC is gonna be a bad*ss
Status: 1200+ chapters , completed, epic storylineMC isn't an unfeeling blob nor is he an edgy psycho.Falls into the neutral or chaotic good camp, so sorry if you wanted a villain. However i feel that this story has perfect balance between its many elements. What I like is that the mc makes a genuine connection with the world and people around him and there are plenty of likable side characters. The villains provide a real sense of threat despite the mc being quite OP to be frank. One of my biggest complains with trial read webnovels is that often times the only interesting part of the story is the power system, the world building or some other gimmicky mechanics, and while that is enough to keep my interested in the starting part of the story, once the mc becomes powerful enough i just stop caring, it's not just about lowered stakes its also cause some mc don't really form any meaningful connections or friends or have anything that they genuinely care about, which imo is a very important part of having a soulful and engaging narrative.This story has that good stuff, it's not too much but its there, which makes it worth it.Do give it a try.
This is a review of the first twenty chapters. This story is a well written supernatural tale of a man who comes back to life in someone else’s body. The lead, Zhou Ze, was a doctor who was cut by a supernatural being and then died. He wakes up in the underworld, is attacked, and then wakes up as a wandering soul in his old hometown. Eventually, Zhou Ze is able to take over the murdered body of Xu Le. Unlike Zhou Ze who was an orphan, Xu Le has a complicated relationship with his family. Xu Le had a cold relationship with his wife. The plot has been balanced between Zhou Ze adapting to being reborn as a nonhuman and his development of ties to Xu Le’s family. The author wisely uses character count to keep both the description rich and the story moving. The story point of view mostly stays with the main character which leads to time lapses and confusion about what actually occurred during some supernatural events. Many supernatural events have not been fully explained by the twenty chapter. Overall all this tale strongly represents mystery, supernatural, and slice of life genres with touches of romance and horror added. If you are looking for a clever fast paced story what will thrill you but not scare you please consider this work.
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The story is getting better n more interesting. Things are starting to move. Unfortunately, have to wait another 1 week for the next updates. Can't we have at least 2x a week of updates? The waiting is driving me crazy!
