Well, this is a good start to a story but it's good to make sure you stick to your schedule. You owe us 3 chapters. Hopefully you're already in development
Great book but the story/questline proceed too slowly, they keep stalling everywhere and the main character hasn't even killed her first monster yet.
He changes how the Mc normally acts when around love interest for example when she lives in his home temporarily she invites her friend to live with her he normally would have kicked her out but decides to do nothing. Said friend poisons Mc instead of killing her he just leaves her be with no hard feelings.
Hey peeps, author review here, not going to tell you that this book is amazing or that it will change your life or any of that rubbish. However I do honestly hope you check the book out and let me know your thoughts on it. Currently I have rough plans for the first 550 chapters with the option for more depending on whether people would like the final arc to take place or not (Will become clearer when the time comes.)Thank you for taking the time to read this review and the book and have a goid day!
Cue in all the sad songs that involves rain! It may be too early to do a review for this book given that it only has 5 chapters, but it was such an enjoyable read that I would recommend it to anyone who likes story that could break ?
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Not a comprehensive review;I just wanted to show the author some appreciaion for what I thought was an excellent story.Qual:Pretty good. The story flows well enough that I did not notice any errors.Updates:Nothing to complain about since I only just saw this story a few hours ago.Dev`p:Pretty good and out of the norm. Got annoyed at the idea of tourneys but this was almost immediately discarded.The tourney in this instance was actually pretty sensible. The School War itself was somewhat irrational - given there is a Vampire-led autocracy on the outside that would imply the Mages need to unite. Plus, the class divide is such that it is a recipe for trouble later on since the disenfranchised will always seek an outlet if they are ignnored too long. I would harzard that the ruling Mage class of those with bloodlines are far stronger than the Vampires and their human minions since the 2 vampires could not take down a single advanced Mage. Plus, the indications of the existence of truly destruction spells like that 'troublemaker' spell seems to imply that such internal divisions among the Mages makes sense in some way since they are in an unassailable position.Char:Pretty ok. I am not comfy with some of the decisions he has adopted,but this is a difficult one to manage.World: Like story dev`p, this is well advanced. We did not see much of the other world they share but the little we did see makes good sense. The Magic world and rules are well thought out and managed.Cough cough...ot good giving out 5 stars...people get big heads you know...would have applied it to the updates section but that would have been unfair...ok, will review this once more a few weeks down the lines...should have something to nit-pick on if only about the number of new chapters!
Little to no idea of what's going on story wise, main character is random at best, wakes up in a new world and is okay with it and acting like he knows what's going on like he has a great plan when we the readers don't even understand what he's doing and why but it just works, suddenly a love interest that make no sense and happens like i saved you now love me, then they split up and the more plans that you don't know about or understand.
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If the description of the story looks familiar, it is because it's basically the description for rebirth of the thief who roamed the world, just less descriptive. If the story content looks similar, it's because it is exactly the same as rebirth of the super thief, the only difference being the quality of writing.