What a nice novel author I got to say it's awesome pleas keep up the good work author and please update more often overall its good :) although I still didn't read it wholly I think this story will go smoothly
I can't really say anything, it's a fun read. I recommend it. I know I said I'll give a proper review, but I really can't say anything. It's a solid read.I didn't find any grammar errors that I can point out. The character, in my opinion, is nothing special, there was some development, nothing crazy.The world is nothing special, it's like real life.The story is decent, it was fast-paced, but not rushed, and you can follow it without a problem.Overall it's a decent, good read.
It's a good novel with a good scenario, so much space for growth! Don't have a perfect gramatic, but... who am i to have been disapointed by this heheh.Hope this job continues better!
So let's be honest, this review isn't really here to explain anything or whatever, it's just for an additional 5 Star review. Consider dropping a good review for the honesty bros. Of course you can write a negative one, as long as you are constructive, although that would be hard before getting to at least 10 chapters...
This is a good novel, the plot is solid and characters are likeable, the writing quality is good and it's easy to read, I def recommend it, good luck and well done author!
Let me just lay out what's happening because the tension in this chapter is INSANE. Someone tried to drug Su Yaoyao with aphrodisiac incense at a palace banquet in front of the EMPRESS and the CROWN PRINCE. That alone is life-or-death stakes—if she'd fallen into the Crown Prince's arms while under the influence, her reputation would be destroyed and she'd be blamed for the scandal. But Su Yaoyao outplayed it. She steadied herself, played the victim perfectly, and redirected suspicion toward Su Yun'er. But Su Yun'er isn't done. She escalates. She spills wine on Su Yaoyao deliberately and has a TRAP set up in the changing room. The stakes just went from 'reputation ruined' to 'what exactly is waiting for her in that changing room?' The author leaves this hanging and I am SCREAMING. Then there's the political layer. The dancer's family has been 'taken care of' but the Imperial Household Department is involved. Su Yun'er is panicking because this could trace back to her. She's not just fighting Su Yaoyao—she's fighting to protect herself from consequences. And Xiao Chenyuan? He's watching ALL of this. He caught the dancer's lie immediately, he protected Su Yaoyao publicly, he picked up her hairpin deliberately. He's not a passive observer. He's playing his own game and Su Yaoyao just realized he's more interesting than she imagined. Every conflict layer is connected. Every action has consequences. I cannot look away.
Thank you.
TL:DRTerrible grammar, inconsistent writing, and generally super cringy novel.Honestly, Extra Chapter 0 from Supreme Magus is a chapter pointing out cliches in novels, and this entire novel is basically the same as this one chapter.Mc kills " a powerful person"s son, goes on the run with a girl, she dies, he becomes "an assassin" that can supposedly dodge bullets, then goes on to get revenge and murder the entire family of the dead kid, including the employees working for them.Mc dies, travels back in time and starts playing a "VRMMO" in which he gets OP stats. Two(?) days after release there are already " experts" in the game or w/e. The game has time dilation so two days in are one day IRL. Then we get told that there is a limit of 10 hours playing in the game as well, to stop no-lifers.Mc wants to be with his waifu and he "meets" her again in a gym, where he proceeds to save her by punching a guy and knocking out his mate, which makes him fly 3 meters back and falls unconscious. His grill immediately leaves the gym so he "gives them another quick beating" before running outside after her. In the span of a couple of minutes(?) he beats these guys twice, they call their "powerful uncle (or w/e)" and he beats them again.
oke interested...noted..... I just add dis in my library I will comeback after dis novel reach 100+ chapters .............. Thank you!!
Anyone who's read: My Wife is a Beautiful CEO, My cold and elegant CEO wife and any similar novel would enjoy this novel as long as they don't mind reading all the plots jumbled into one novel
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good story