The old priest looks me over, saying: "The empress has been swallowed in severe attachment, thus become a ghost. Should she still not relieve her soul and reincarnate, I'm afraid she will be confined to the human realm for eternity, reduced to an evil spirit."
There is absolutely no logic in here, so the family of the mc is exterminated vy the royal family and the stargaze family with a direct implication from anna stargaze the " love interest
Unique approach , good character design and background. While the environment is the same as many other novels, the concept is new and novel.Haven't gone too far into the story , only 25 chaps in. Almost tempted to spend and buy my way through the rest of the chapters , but i have been disappointed far too ofter, so im going to wait it out.Negatives :Gender mixup is a big problem throws me off completely.Character is very young, so perhaps the author aims to stretch the novel far , but that's a problem for me because most authors lose the motivation and the quality mid way and ultimately makes me feel like my time was wasted. Hope you can keep up the quality and not stretch it into a bad story just to fill up word count. Better keep it short as long as you keep up the quality.
evil mc , no harem , no romance , let's go.
I am quite into this book because of the main lead's progression since he is unskillful into becoming an expert like a god. Besides, the storyline is so interesting to follow and there're a lot of things to be excited about such as where the step of qi is he has practiced, and what the secret of his grandpa that Freya tries to keep and hide.
"Filled with enchanting worlds, compelling characters, and unexpected twists, 'Whispering Stars' is an immersive journey you won't want to end."
I don't have much to say. I only ask that you try to read the first 15 to 20 chapters. The beginning is more of an introduction to the character, characteristics, and motivations.These chapters are definitely not to be skipped, but the novel's plot starts to develop after these first chapters.I plan to release 2 chapters a day most of the time, but one day or another I may only release 1.That's it. If you have any questions, ask directly in the chapters. (Sometimes, I won't see your comment here.)I will develop the auxiliary chapter little by little, so it won't be so empty forever.
never seen such a unique novel the world of the novel grows at a good pacethe worlds lore is interesting each chapter complements each otherthe authors implementation of the system was done very nicelyBEST NOVEL SO FAR
Hello author. I tried reading the first 10 chapters but eventually gave up. just my personal opinion but I recommend that you rewrite the starting chapters. The reason why is because the same thing was said multiple times but in different ways. Why would I want to read about the same thing twice?I get that because of the constant time skips, you have to reassure the reader that "the mc has yet to change" but it felt strenuous to read and I wasn't told anything new. Also the world building. You introduced us to the crumbled and war-torn city early on but it wasn't until after a few chapters that I was told that there was an actual group of people living together. Maybe I missed it but there was no explanation for how the (camp?) looked like.These were just my thoughts and a writer can never cater to everyone so I understand if it was just me that prefers a different style of storytelling.
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Great start to a new must read book hopefully. The mc has started to be fleshed out well and developed nicely. Curious to see the route the world building goes. Hopefully this book continues and doesn't get dropped like most start ups.
This is one of the best series I have ever read. And I have read a lot good series, chinese, japanese, korean etc. I believe that everyone that reads this will have bad points about this story, but if you look past the one or two bad parts, this is a great series, I would definently continue reading it.