"Yeah! that's right, Bill...hah.
She nodded her head, but she was drenched in sweat.
It went on for a whole minute.
The first few seconds, no response.
nice good story. need more chapters. keep writing
unsatisfying. I've now read 250 chapters and while i really want to like this i just don't. the last 150 chapters left me in a perpetual state of annoyance. we have a very cool set up, the first 100 chapters are well written some pacing issues but nothing deal breaking. The mc keeps getting into impossible situation which means he gets absolutely trashed, he does manage to make it out alive but you never really get this satisfying pay off, additional there's no real rest between one catastrophic desaster and the next. As a consequence it often feels like the mc is power less and even in situations where we could get some satisfying comeuppance like with the scamming information merchant we just move on. another peeve i have is that at some point MCs brain goes afk and we have to deal with the consequences for the next 100 chapters. all in all very unsatisfying but sadly not bad enough for me to put away immediately causing me to waste too much time...p.s if you want to read a story with these flaws but on crack give stygian diviner a go you'll hate it
one of the most well written works I've read on webnovel and it deserves more audience and more hype ❤️❤️❤️
this is one of the best novel it has amazing plot and has such a vast power system mc is villain with some wierd code of conducts it's awesome everything is exciting idk why this thing isn't on trending also why just 1M it deserves far more than that
It’s a good novel with a ton of potential, i hope to see a lot more of it in the future. The setting is fairly unique and the grammer/ wording of the novel is good.
to be honest I may never find a better writer than pancake.
Woooow what a story. Author I can't wait for the rest of your story. Such a good story. I will love watching it TV though. But try and update as possible as you can. In good job author ????
I love it........................................................................................................................................................