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Absolutely brilliant great detail through out.some spelling mIstakes from predictive typing. but a really Good read, You should give it a go.also The Devils Son Is a very good read also.
first off I love the idea because it's actually really cool. and in fact I also think this would be great with just a single addition. it needs an editor. the novel is rife with grammar and syntax errors to the point where it's actually distracting. on top of that there's quite a few places you can tell we're the result of a finger slipping while typing numbers.
grammer is fine, but the story, itsjust another chuunibyou author writing his wet dreams without much thought of how social life really works
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I must say, I'm really not a big fan of goody goody MCs. The plots might seem entertaining, sure, but it's just all over the place. One min. the story has elaborate plans then the next it goes like "no I'm not going to betray them their still my family" or "no I can't hurt them, they're like family to me" or "don't be mad at them even if they're a manipulative and psychopathic family". I mean seriously this is a cultivation novel, there is no place for goodness and naivety here. And lastly, why is it offline Cultivation? I can't seem to understand at what part of the story is it detailed to be offline cultivation.
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Typical trash novel where MC is talentless and then gets generic rebirth, faceslapping everyone, building a harem, molesting random girls and stupidly attacking people far more powerful than himself because of ****ty cultivators pride.
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Shameless author here. Dual cultivation? Big harem? Gentle but cruel? System? Illicit relationships? This novel contains everything, please take a peek, and I hope you all enjoy this story.PS - MC is a male prostitute, so if you guys don't like MC sleeping with married women (Some people consider it as sharing partners, NTR, blah blah), then you guys don't need to read this novel.
I’m quite sad it’s over and the end is too rushed, but what a masterpiece
the grammar is good and it's easy to keep up with who's speaking and all, but there's just too much going on. It's like it's just this weird almagation of a bunch of different stories and things that are from completely different universes. like you just throw whatever comes to mind in it.