Wow, short horror tales, you are certainly not getting the recognition you deserve, you have a good grasp of suspense and know the right time to put in the horror elements.
1. rap2. this video is all about numbers. but 90% of the numbers in this novel are wrong. someone gives me 20 dollar to get something I need 10 dollars to produce. wow thats 35 dollar profit ! if I do that 6 times I already make 9k dollar profit!
you should put this into the fanfic
readers always go to fanfic when they
search one piece
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reluctantly read15 chapters . i didn't like it.
Chinese novels, guy going out for trouble. and every passersby becomes extreme busy buddy . end of the day he finds trouble and kill people left right. no other character than MC
The author's narration is great, didn't see any errors from it. Title, synopsis is intriguing and the synopsis also the story is great, give this a read! Hooked by its descriptive narration!
OK I loved reading this book to the extent that I'm willing to give it a review.
The plot the setting the twists. It's all awesome. Overall the novel is awesome. Keep iin it up author :)
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I've had it with these Chinese nationalist scum. China may or may not be a good country, but some of its people need to be rehabilitated.
Sick of this sh*te.
interesting
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Good, but expecting more, I think author should release 2 chapter per day, very interesting story all the best, bring more character so that the story is interesting, tell about farzana allahamahut alban, so it will be more interesting
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Great story.
We always hear story about exception like how a guy has iq of 166 or a guy who is cultivation genius or a fighting expert. But this story is different it's about a guy who wanted to be a cultivation genius but it's reality he barely passed the test got admitted to a academy he didn't even knew existed. let's see his journey.
Keep up good work author
The story is solid if a little bit cliche at times, sprinkled with some twist here and there. Character driven story is the theme of this novel instead of plot driven one. There are no adversary for self reflection the MC would face as his system practically make him Basketball Jesus. The conflict would be outside the court most of the time. This can be considered a weakness of the novel, or it's strength from a different point of view depending on the author skill to write such character.Although I fear a chapter so short for once a week release in the future after it catch up with the NBA arc would hamper the story. Rule of thumb, if you can see a chapter ending by a scroll from the bottom of your phone to the top most part, it might be too short all things considered.