Thank you for a good novel, at first I thought it gonna be western fantasy+system but it is actually Cultivation+system which also fits my preference.
I would like to say it is Excellent & best for some beginner writing such amazing Novel, And the starting 4 chapters Nailed It..Keep It Up, Alex. I Will give it a 5.
Yo, Author Here!Hey, this is my first novel, and I've tried to make it as enjoyable as possible for you.I can't really judge my own writing, whether it's good or bad, but I hope that if I've made any mistakes, you can help me improve. Now, I can only hope you'll give it a try. As for those who think it's shameless to review your own work, well, if I can't give myself a five-star review, how can I expect you to?So, have a good read!
Really, really Nice book. Love the idea. I like where it's going. Love the mc Reid too. I just hope the author keeps updating. The narrative flows well. I think I'll have to update this review when I've read more chapters. Just keep updating author.
Wow this is an interesting book .I love the character build, appearances and how they are developed.
I love this story. Like it's bit similar to Pokemon, feeling nostalgic.The revenge at start is too meance.The progression is bit too slow but I lobe this.
As always 5 star rating. This is my first work. So there will be many grammatical mistake. I will suggest reading around first 20 or more chapters.-Find grammatical mistake in this review
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This is actually really good for your first novel and compared to your fan fiction. The world background could use some work cause you only have one kingdom the Phoenix kingdom but I like how all other nations' leaders are related. the writing quality can be improved there are some mistakes or missing words
The name beginning got me into it. I must, this is a very hooking book.
Shameless Author plug ?I beyond appreciate any comments, reviews, gifts, or reading of my book. Couple little things -1. I write the book on my phone, and autocorrect has been the bane of my existence. 2. Unfortunately, when you go back to edit the book, they don't also edit the published chapter. So, if the chapter was published before I was able to proofread, then the errors stand ?u200d?.3. The chapters get significantly longer the further into the book you get, so the first few chapters will be the shortest ever. 4. This is a series. The first book finished at Chapter 121, and at least 4 total books are planned. Once again, I appreciate all the comments, feedback, and reviews. They honestly brighten my day and inspire me to keep going. ?❤️
what wrong with webnovel , they step side the good novel and give US all those stupid same gene novel .this novel is very good . it's sad me that I didn't get to know there was this good novel of i didn't search for other novel ?