can't wait to read this awesome novel, I'm boiling inside ✌️??? this is going to be an epic one booyah!!! and I can't wait, I can't wait I can't wait AUTHOR RELEASE THE NOVEL PLEASE
MC is a bit of a hypocrite, anyone who uses women as tools are scum unless its him then its only natural to do so. Doesn’t fawn over every fairy he see’s which is nice but no matter how amazing of aloof and cold the woman is they because dunces the moment they meet the MC and choose to be his slave which is dumb but oh well. MC is like Changge from “I am the fated villain” except for this guy chooses to be borderline scum while Changge has to be because of his inheritance and system
It's really good novel.... It's really good novel.... It's really good novel.... It's really good novel.... It's really good novel.... It's really good novel....
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it is really a pity that the story does not continue. it had a lot of potential and so far the story has gone well and I liked it a lot. I hope reading the various comments in your story would continue it because it was really good
The story was pretty decent until Chapter 25 in which the author completely strips the main character of his one quality.The first 25 chapters do some interesting world building that I can't really say whether it's good or not but it's definitely different. The main drive to read the series was the main characters "level 999" strength as described in the description of the novel but for some god forsaken reason the author completely trashes the novel at chapter 25 by completely ruining the entire build up and story up to that point since the entire novel was based on his strength.Honestly the author should either start a new novel and try not to ruin it. Or reboot the novel but with the same world but have the character start at 1. So everyone doesn't feel like they wasted their time reading a power fantasy novel without power.
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Translation Quality: PoorThe translator+'editor' combo can't even capitalize the names of players. On top of that, there are tons of notes either from author or translator mentioning stupid things such as: a quarter of an hour is equal to 15 minutes, 2nd tier is one tier less than 3rd tier, etc.. These things should be removed.Story Development: PoorI've read over 30 chapters in, and literally less than 45 minutes passed since he had entered into the game. Yes, I spent probably 2-4 times the amount of time reading 30 chapters than the minutes that passed by in-game.Here's a breakdown of how the story goes:2% plot8% comments made by MC saying "as I expected" or "as I predicted"30% reactions by the audience10% beta testers wondering how MC did XX thing, even though there's only one possible answer30% info dump and explanations of things20% repetition of the same explanation in twenty different waysCharacter Design: PoorThe only thing this MC knows how to say is "as I expected, ..." and "as I predicted, ..." He's supposedly some god-tier top 100 player, but in the beginning gets surprised by a level 5 city guard using a basic skill after being attacked. There are so many issues with the character design that it's too much effort to list them out.As for other characters go, the sister didn't seem to have too bad of a set-up, but I haven't read far enough to see whether the author will mess up her design or not.World Background: Average+Look, this is a stereotypical VRMMO reincarnation story. Essentially, just imagine ROTSSG with some elements changed. While there are quite a few ignorant and wrong statements made regarding the IRL world by the narrator, you just have to accept that most Chinese web novel authors have intelligence deficiency.I'm a fan of this genre so if there were more chapters I'd probably continue to drudge through this novel and keep nitpicking on it every few paragraphs (I felt like I wrote at least 5-6 comments per chapter.. new record).↓↓↓tl;dr: This novel is trash. The only thing you'll get out of it is being annoyed about how slow the pacing is, and the endless info dumps. Seriously, you'd think they would end by chapter 10 or 15! Nope, this author has managed a new record, info dumping for 32 chapters straight. I'm going to go out on a (very short) limb here and say that they will continue doing so for the next few hundred chapters. This is very clearly their writing 'style,' if it can be called that.
Saftey warning ⚠ .............................Read at your risk............... This novel is among the worst I had ever read .........................