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Just wanted to point out that the name doesn’t make sense.
I'm enjoying the story much to my surprise. Grammar needs to be polished though, but all in all it's my cup of tea.. Hope you would improve your writing skills I suggest.. Or get an editor or just a proof reader that would be perfect.. Nothing much to say about some plotholes. Nevertheless, it's good.
As a person who also love games especially RPG's. This is truly a relatable fantasy to be imagined with, people like me who did not have the opportunity to become a pro-gamer or wish to become one, can treasure this masterpiece and enjoy it's journey to become champions and feels like we are too. I really recommend these. Thanks for the author and the translators as well.
I just started reading this book and it going great so far and am looking forward to reading more of this novel so more updates please more updates please.
So good I need more and please don’t drop I don’t care if your gramma is no correct just don’t drop it
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I don't know much about the story yet, but I can see a potential in the plot. Some punctuation errors around the dialogues can be improved with a little editing. Keep writing :)
An amazing novel with an interesting plot. Read the first chapter and was intrigued by it. The opening was good, dialogues are well written. Narration entices the reader to continue. Will look forward to further chapters. Good luck Author!
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It's good. It has a typo here or there but for the most part the grammar and spelling are pretty good.
Cannot believe that author has ended the book. The beautiful journey of Chole came to end. Please readers go through this book and believe me you are going to love this ' Diary of the Dead'. Thanks author for creating such a beautiful story. Saranghae.