Unfortunately, even with their obvious invitation and numerous gifts, the elder remained stone faced throughout the two days he interacted with them and only accepted their gifts along with a list of their products not their offers.
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Aaron spun around, shocked to see his sister standing in the kitchen doorway. Jackson stared back at her, and from what Aaron could tell, he was incredibly surprised.
Maybe suggesting "half" was a bit reckless from my part. I'm sure I will regret it later. However, for now it's better to divide the profit by half than get kicked out of this area.
Thank God finally someone did this right. The story is quite enjoyable. While I do think that he could have gone more magical instead of modern weapons. It is still good. I just hope he introduces a lot magical elements cause guns just make it boring.
Hi, I'm loving your book - it's a true gem! Are you planning to release an updated edition or explore new ways to share your work with even more readers
首先，大家好，我可能會稍微劇透，所以如果不想被劇透的話，建議跳過這篇評論，謝謝。現在，對你說幾句話，作者。我真的非常喜歡你的網絡小說，對於一個開頭來說，有很多優點，但也有一些小缺點。先談談問題。其實唯一的問題就是你更新的不穩定性。你提到你正在經歷考試和假期的時期，所以我完全理解，但這也是我不能給你滿分的原因。我本來想說有時候翻譯有點問題，但這很可能是我的翻譯工具從英文到中文時翻譯不太準確的緣故。現在來談談優點，這些優點確實不少。首先，你的小說故事有一定的獨特性，並且在戰略方面有著重要的角色，我非常欣賞這一點！此外，角色數量不少，我希望今後會有越來越多的新角色出現。而且，我注意到一些伏筆，但我不會說出來，以免劇透（也因為如果猜錯了會很尷尬）。還有，城市以及世界的設定看起來非常周全，我也希望未來能繼續保持這樣的水準。總之，繼續說下去吧。我非常喜歡 Ume 這個角色，她的成長表現得很好。而且 Naboru 很快理解了自己的力量，我真的很喜歡！我甚至在想他是否故意輸掉比賽，讓 Ume 展示她的能力，哈哈！另外，Lysandros 似乎是一個非常出色的主角！好了，抱歉我寫得有點多了！未來我會繼續在其他章節留言，期待你能按照我所期望的那樣繼續發展你的小說！P.S. : 哦對了，拜託快換一下小說的封面吧！每次看到它我都差點以為點錯小說了，哈哈！我開玩笑的，其實封面挺符合故事的，不過我個人不是很喜歡。另外，我希望封面上能加上書名和作者名字，先謝謝啦!
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Three chapters in and I detect whimsiness in the female lead, which I love. Great job so far author.
this is a great novel and so amazing to read.
Wow! This story is really intriguing ?? I still wanna know more about this story. Great start by the way, the story development is quiet good too. While you handle very well the translation. Keep up the good work, and always do your best. Good luck to us. ??
First off my favorite type of storys are BL story's. So off bat you got me right their :) Your a very skilled writer and the plot is well thought out. I dont want to give away any spoils because this is what I would consider to be high quality writing! ? perfect amount of romance and action.