Spirit_Immortal
This novel started quite good however it ended. The author abandoned this novel so there is nothing to read here anymore.
Hope you find another read.
Very interesting concept, have been looking for a novel like this since 'Legendary Mechanic' and I hope this work gets picked up so I can support it and the great author!
However this is a very small excert of what seems to be a massive story, so anything can happen when considering writing quality, world building and character development.
We can just hope this gets picked and supported properly.
I would say that is a very new genre.... you know mc reincarnating as a hero where villian is main protagonist
Till now , this novel is pretty nice and updating stability is also very good and especially I like how mc doesn't want to be associated with any of heroines ( in a romantic way ) . I really really hope that author won't add harem or any romance here as you know how much difficult it is to find a novel without any romance or harem nowadays .. .. I also like Xin's interaction with system.
Nice novel .... keep it up author !!!!
Well, I have a question .. author , is English your second language ??
I’m not sure how this novel is going to turn out but I feel translator is trash
I'm not sure what everyone else who rated this higher is reading, but this is unreadable.
Character names get introduced without any context, and lots of sentences don't even make sense.
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This novel is actually pretty good, if you enjoy reading op cultivation novel I would recommemd you read it. My main concern for this novel is its update stability.
I hope ya won’t be like other Original authors who update the novel but isnt about the story but note or whatever. Its really annoying when that happens and get your hope shatter into pieces
I love the story but when will you update, author?
This Novel had so much potential but was ruined by every character that isn’t an ally of the MC. Nobody uses their brain unless they’re on the MC’s side.
Every character is his enemy as well, haven’t seen a single neutral character yet except a clan leader but that’s the minimum he’s 400 years old. Everyone else just slanders the MC and basically 20% of the dialogue of this novel (free chapters) is just random characters insulting the MC for no apparent reason at all, (6 Year old MC btw) (he’s not even 6 yet but that just makes it worse)
Anyways, unless someone tells me this nonsense stops I can’t bring myself to pay just to read something that is clearly triggering me….
Hey author-san, good book you have here. The story is really captivating and has a lot of potential for future chapters. However you seem to prefer uploading on wattpad. Please don't forget us webnovel readers here
Wow, this is a new concept. I wonder what does the people from planet hilan are like and how will they be able to adapt with the new environment they are in.. i hope madel and henry would have more scenes together
The start is very good.
The plot looks promising.
The writing quality is nice.
Supporting you, AUTHOR
All I want is -
''More chapters''?
''More Chapterssssss''??
"More chapterssssssssss"???
I gave it a shot and read 100 chapters because the author said the protagonist is OP and doesn't hide his powers much. Well, that was a lie. The protagonist is weak and stupid. Let alone being OP, he's not even the top of his class. He's also very lazy.He's described as someone more mature than his age would indicate, which is 16, but he acts like a 12 year old, so that's also a lie.As for pacing... after 100 chapters, I feel like the novel hasn't even started yet. He has gone to school, been insulted the whole time for being trash, which is true, and now he's playing around in some random tower to find some healing elixir. So I'd say it's snail pace. Veeeeery slow.
