i know its great
It’s like 5 chapters after he delivers the body not that much of a spoiler lol
Good thing that fuckin bitch lilina died twice
Please give it happy ending.
I like look!!
Ah, such a beautiful story. Ahem. Sorry, got caught up with my worshipping.
In any case, the writing quality is pretty good, thanks to the editor. There are still a few places in which grammer needs to be checked over though(but this is natural. Humans can't make everything perfect).
Stability of Updates...hmm...for the most part, the updates are coming really well, just a few times couldn't meet the deadline(haha, better than good ol'sloth me)
Everything else is just perfect! The way characters never appear the way they do, the growth of the children, and of course, our MC. It was hilarious reading the interaction of a plant and the demonic bull. XDXD
I think the world background is great, and it actually sounds realistic, not just some bullcrud stuff being thrown at you.
I find it is extremely easy to be hooked. I swear, it sounds just like those best-selling books.
here I'm gonna boast my insignificant boast. I PUT IN THE 100TH POWERSTONE. SO PROUD OF MYSELF :D:D:D:D:D
And that's about it. time to go back in my worship mode~
i Like the fanfic so far the Interactions with the Readers are nice too.
the timeskip are in the begining necessary so the Reader aren't bored i think the Autor had a good idea to skip the Training scenes.
can Not wait to Read the continuation of the story.
Reminds me of Reborn as Batman's little Brother.
World background check
Translation quality check
Stability of updating you go to improve man
Story development check
Character design check
Please increase the release rate author. Pls reply if you can. Thanks
great plot and captivating story . page turner
I recommend you stop reading this crap of novel, made absurdly, the author or is trolling everyone or is drugged or is a complete incompetent who can not even give a decent sequence to the facts .buff and debuff the mc in the face of the stick , with lapses of amnesia that for a reincarnated person who remembers everything is more like a dung.