The story or novel is really dynamic, explosive and interesting. The novel progression and development is good as well. However, the characters background needs a little bit more to stability. There is a bit of a hiccup with the translation as well. I believe in time, you will improve immensely.
I love your story, it really takes you to a dreamland of imagination and whatever you can enjoy.
Yes I am reviewing my own story.
I began to write this series because I was interested in series like Konosuba. I asked myself "What would YOU want out of an isekai series?" and so I decided to write my own.
This story is designed to poke fun at the general idea of isekai wish fulfillment series while also being its own story. I don't want to sound egotistical, but from what others have told me the writing is funny and consistently well done, the characters are memorable and enjoyable, and the world is well built. I don't ask that you make this your favorite story, but I do recommend that you at least give this a try.
At first glance it may seem like predictable story about weakling mc getting op by cheat, but its not a typical cliché.!!!! The element of mystery is intact throughout and author is not writing things randomly.
The good thing is that demon king also lacks in knowledge and power. So he is not exactly OP(
Authorrrrr! pls continue this book????. Its one of my favorite books. If you don't this little bookworm might die of update deprivation. I promise I will send a big castle or something when I start earning. please author????
Cultivation=cool. Molesting a girl=not cool.~~granted the girl was trying to frame him, but two wrongs don’t make a right. I’m a girl so I find it disgusting. I don’t even read romances that have any form of rape (drugs, alcohol, misunderstandings, whatever.) I did like the cultivation and world building, but not enough to continue to read. Looks like it’s kind of leaning towards a harem? He flirts and acts different around girls. Oh, and in case anyone wants to know, this novel is extremely homophobic. Like if two guys are kissing, then prepare to read a whole chapter on everyone throwing up.
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Why was this novel released when the winner wasn't. The story is mediocre compared to the first and third stories. So who decided this story won? Fix it.
It’s a short and nice story. I feel like this could have been longer but that’s just my opinion. The ending wasn’t trash like other novels because it ends how you expect to end. It was a nice read, romance was not bad, but it is a small part so if you’re reading this for that then you will be disappointed.
Honestly I kept skipping this book when it cam up on my recommendations. I regret tgat I kept skipping it because this is a really good book. At first the writing was a bit touchy in places, but it got better over time. The story plot is really good as well. I still have not found out what the brother's IGN is yet, and I cant wait. There are times where I think there was too much information overload. For example, seeing all that information on his status. Other than that the story flows really well.
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I like your story, it is interesting. There are two chapters so it is hard for me to decide the pacing. Overall this story is good. I like it
Awesome i lovE it