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I would cut one star from writing quality. But since I am giving five stars in other chapters, I might just give five stars in writing quality.
This start is amazing, though some things are explained. It is a nice way to connect virtual reality with cultivation.
Waiting for more chapters.....
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Great work.
The Grammer can be improved.
plus the story line is interesting.
work more on your chapters.
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The author is quite had a good grasp on the story. Nice description of what is currently happening and I enjoyed reading! Best of luck author for the success of your novel! Have a good day!
This novel has a good mix of system and action. I gotta say I'm impressed! This kind of writing was scarce as many system novels flooded this site. A cut above the rest to be exact! Nice job of portraying the characters and absolutely one of the best so far that I have read. Good execution of the genre! Kudos and good luck in the future!
Well, World development is nowhere i mean he describes his surroundings quite well but the world itself hasnt been described much. not that it matters to much anyway its quite good if you ask me great writing and well he a stone no villages or citys to speak of yet. Anyway definitely enjoyable to read the characters is great I enjoy it and the character is actually intelligent. He uses his average intelligence rather than just being an idiot.
Mind blowing writing ideas represented on this book need for something more like this .
Something more realistic
Thanks keep it up.
Best wishes for you.
A good beginning for the story. Like how in the beginning the mother is nice and caring about the child, only to give him away to some random strangers at the first sight of money. As someone else said, something in between the dialogue (some actions or something else) could be to change the flow a bit, because it's a little hard to read. Otherwise, not bad.
I found this when I searched up phyco to see if their were any good evil character stories. Here I find this gem, great for me. So far I am loving it and expect even more even if I am ou on the first 30 chapters.
How much of this did you take from desolate era? you took a ton of cultivation levels from that series can't wait to see what more you'll take from that book.
From the title and what it wrote in synopsis, I think I had read a very, very similar one before.. Reiki recovery:billions time talent.. In mtl if I'm not mistaken... If the guy start from hundred times talent to thousand to ten thousand, then it really the same.. But young man instead of old man in Reiki novel..