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A good beginning for the story. Like how in the beginning the mother is nice and caring about the child, only to give him away to some random strangers at the first sight of money. As someone else said, something in between the dialogue (some actions or something else) could be to change the flow a bit, because it's a little hard to read. Otherwise, not bad.
I am loving it very much, looking forward to reading it. Every thing is well explained and lots of experience can be gained from it. Well I love basically all (except horror).
It's so lame that it becomes funny with all the cold jokes. Typical orphan op mc acting like an idiot trying to act normal but always have insane choices like shooting the policemen because they prevent him going home.
