The story was quite interesting, it draws you in and makes you want to keep on reading to see how it develops. Its all good until you start noticing the weird "pet names" they have for their enemies. At first you think they might be calling their neighboring countries BARBARIANS becouse the had a misunderstanding in the past. But as the story progresses, it goes from a posible misunderstanding to a deadly feud, and its not just neigboring countries its every country. RACIST TO THE MAX. If you want to promote nationalism there are better ways to do it without coming on as complete racists and xenophobic. But no, they kill off everyone else, they MC has the ability to revive everyone but nope they dont deserve it, not even the women and children, guess they are potencial BARBARIANS.
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Hello Author, I really really loved the story??. So please make an update soon I am going crazy wondering what is next.??
A spinose não reflete direito q historia, para mim pessoalmente não importa se a novel é clichê desde de que seja bem escrita, mas essa não é. Como vc deve ter lido em outros comentários. Morte cerebral apenas. Devia ter acreditado nas críticas e não ter perdido meu tempo.
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The quality of writing is quite low, it almost seems as if the author doesn't read the chapters through for mistakes. There are probably 5-10 mistakes in a half page chapter..The chapters are very short and only contain one scene (almost) but with frequent releases.The story processes way too fast and doesn't really have a depth. It makes reading it very shallow.The other also forgets/neglects to explain many things until after the MC has put it to use. You don't get to learn why and how the MC knows the different things.Also the MC starts of with a personality of a 16-20 year old in the body of a 7 year old... it's just plain stupid and lazy writing of the author in my opinion.The characters are dull and already after a few chapters, it becomes apparent that they are fillers, even the family of the MC.The story probably had a lot of potential, but the author needs to develop a better beginning and background before I'd give the story another look.
Wow this story is comolete and utter GARBAGE. waste of four hours. please pause this story, go on YouTube and learn how to write a story and before you post use Gramerly. The story has a interesting concept but the world building is terrible, not to mention the exposition of a 13yr final exam essay. This story seems like a 13yr with mommy issues that gets bullied at school wrote this. I would say more but the story is so terrible that you would have to pay me to give pointers on the specifics of what you did wrong. I'm mainly angry that I wastes my 2hr of my time on this but. But if I didn't tell you your story is trash you'd have a whole bunch of yes men enabling you stagnation as a writer
I just realized I never reviewed this novel after I have been keeping up with the updates for so long. This novel is really amazing, the story is great, the main character is great, the writing quality and the speed of release is great. This story is reminiscent of Emperor’s domination which I also loved.
I genuinely enjoy it. It's such a nice breath of fresh air from the other stuff on the website, and to add to that its beautifully written. The grammar isn't scuffed so it's a smooth read. The updates are consistent so you can count on your daily dose of feudal Japan. The characters aren't bland, they have an actual personality to them. Yeah those are my thoughts. I was never any good at conclusions and wrapping things up in fluid manner.Anyway, the story is good. Even if you think it might not be your cup of tea, give it a try anyway.
This started off fairly well and had me hooked. A guy transported into an Englishman's body etc etc. When Tony got going he had a lot of dominating games, losses and he gave a lot of halftime pep talks to his players then made spectacular comebacks. Then the novel quickly deteriorated into the repeat of dominating, losing against easy teams and SPECTACULAR COMEBACKS nonstop and Tony being an ass. Furthermore, the author is a pedo and Tony is also written as one being obsessed with a 13-15 year old girl throughout the chapters'. Yes, people may say he didn't do anything vastly inappropriate with her but yeah, no. She's still a 13 year old girl when this starts I think. It's sick.
We need more !! we need mass chapter !! 7/week not enough !! spirit stone? power stone? if this novel not make me bored.. i will give it all to you~ now i waiting.....for...more.... chapter.....
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