Hi there! Just here to give you some reviews :) Hope you don't take my review negatively if ever it creates an impact on you.To be honest, I like how you go through with your narration, its like written by an experienced writer (are you?). There are some minor issues with your grammar like in your first chapter,'A shrill insane voice screams from quite a distance away, but the horrifying effect of the voice does nothing to the hundred or so other poorly-dressed figures around him. 'the part ' A shrill insane voice screams...' you could just modify it a bit like, 'Insane-like shrills and screams..' to me it sounds really disturbing because you are putting too much adjectives just to describe, keeping it ****** and short is needed sometimes.'but the horrifying effect of the voice does nothing to the hundred or so other poorly-dressed figures around him.' ill try to edit this part because I cannot explain on what to do on this part.'but the voice that emitted a horrifying effect doesn't affect a hundred (or so) poorly-dressed figures surrounding him.'This is the only thing I could give as an example..I hope you wont take this as an offensive review :)P.S I love the idea you put in your story...
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I am happy that the 1st book I read here is this one but also a little bit sad cause I don't think other books will be able to live up to this
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It's a great humorous story that is lighthearted,but still has that suspenseful and thriller vibe.Its worth it.Hope it will get translatedFgghGhhhhuuyyggghgybghhhhhhhbgvggbhgyhuhhhhghhhhh
Only 6 chapters so far but I know it's gonna be a GEM. It was the cliche transmigration into a villain and making the protagonist fall for him. However, I could feel that the direction of the story would be different from the rest. I'll wait and see.
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So far, i like where the story's going. This book would be perfect for people that enjoys reading action packed survival stories. The story's articulation is good too, makes you feel the story more. Got me hooked on the first chapter.? I highly recommend this story.More chapters Author??
Disagree with amaturewriter. If you wish and skill, you can think up and do a lot here. There is a fanfic of the strongest Quirkless and it is incredibly good, although gg has zenkai boost. I hope that the author will be able to correctly realize his idea. For the first chapters, so far everything is more orderly.
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This was so sweet! My heart melted at many moments and Ayesha's enigmatic yet genuinely nice personality is a perfect example of commendable character writing. Marco's reactions to certain situations was highly relatable and realistic, making the reader feel connected to the MC, ultimately creating an enjoyable story. Obviously, the credit goes to the beautiful writing. The description was out of this world and the scene development was undeniably great; as a reader, I felt true fear, suspense and chills in many of the circumstances faced by the characters, and that goes to show just how good this was. Overall, I loved it ❤️Summed up in one word (jk, it's two words): HIGHLY PRAISE-WORTHY
As the author ill have to give myself a fair critique point of view because i know my flaws and some might see the Glitches in the story line, Alex’s background ignored and further more like those but pls Just have patience as all your observations are more than welcomed .