Interesting take on popular premise.The Main Character is smart and capable. I really like how he looks after his Friends and those he cares about.
hi guys this is shameless review from author, please help to review, whether is good or bad, I write this story with my heart, and sometimes tears, is too good for me, I hope you guys like it, love ?????
don't stop writing this is a hidden gem. don't drop it i want read what happens next to the wilson family and aunt miya and eternal ice empress.
This is possibly the best original story on this site. Not only does it have a solid cast of characters, but its MC is consistent. The author avoids common pitfalls when writing especially in this genre where they focus too much on gathering female followers that they forget to give them a personality. He also makes it plain that the MC is clearly antihero, so if your into that stick around. I've got nothing else just read it it's well written, good characters, a solid and expanding story and a world you can really dig your teeth into.
I'm really into your writing style. It's calm and clear, which makes the story much more understandable than stories that simply rush into action. It's very clear you've thought the storyline through. Also I'm a fan of Theo, he sounds totally adorable. ? My genre is romance, and I think that's what makes me like your writing more. You said on the Forum romance isn't your thing, but you do have a 'romantic' way of describing things sometimes. I like that, you paint a great picture of the world your characters live in.
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I enjoy the choice of names. Subangdaku in Filipino means wide rivers. The names of the characters are very localized. I appreciate the honesty of the book.
I just love it all!! Sooooo cute!!!Such nice history! So heart warming!!The world could be so much brighter if there were more people like then! I couldn't stop reading until the last post! I want to uncover every hiden story that's been peaking!!♡♡♡♡♡
Before I say anything about this novel, first I want to tell you that I'm not into War & military fiction genre but I don't mind reading one if it interests me. And voila, I found just that. Although there are many spelling errors and other little mistakes but considering that the author is writing for the first time, we all could easily let that pass. The story till now has done a good job at keeping my interest up. Although I won't say that I absolutely love this novel, but i'd do say that this is quite a good novel.
Where i see fantasy, sign me up. I love this and I have just read chapter one, I guess I won't be sleeping anytime soon ??? please keep it up, I can't wait to see what happens next! ?