It's a really good read, plenty of action in the first few pages! My only criticism is the fact that there is barely any info on how he died or what his life was before, hopefully it will be sooner than later.
Good
I love the story and the characters. The love and believe of the little girl towards her father is awesome.Hoping to read more chapters of his success and gain family trust.
This novel top tier I tell yah. To tier!!!!
Also I'm doing this review because I'm a slave to this exp to a point where I want to start a cult.
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Ok, so I read up to chapter three before I found a major plothole and dropped the book. The details are in chapter 3 paragraph 15 where I left a lengthy paragraph comment regarding the plothole. It's a shame because the translation was quite good. Not near perfect or anything but still quite good. But I think that the lack of common sense overpowers the good translation and world setting. But if the author can improve on that then the novels in the future might actually be quite good. BTW, author, don't try to save this novel. I said future novels for a reason. This is beyond saving.
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Chose this one and I Have A Martial Arts Panel.
Chose this one and I Have A Martial Arts Panel.
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Hey webnovel when are you translating the new novel from the author of the legendary mechanic. Hey webnovel when are you translating the new novel from the author of the legendary mechanic.
Is not bad, the story that MC can download cultivation techniques and talents of anyone as long as they are in range of system.
It just too bad i didnt see anything worth it in long run while reading this novel, same plot till the end pretty sure
Story moves on slowly but it's engaging. This is a typical xian xia in many senses of the word but atypical at the same time. It fiercely avoids cliche scenarios like "Courting death!" and no face slapping young masters from other families (even though the MC does slap his father's face).
The author seems to care about his story and isn't just writing another lazy rehash of the same d*mn concepts we've seen 200 times. And the MC is actually smart. Like not the author says he's smart while he acts like an absolute dumb*ss smart but actually smart. Like you could agree with many of the things he said while thinking logically. I will say though that personally, I think this book need a little comedy but otherwise, I think this will be quite a decent book about 200 or 300 chaps in.
Fighting, author! Totally give it a try before deciding whether this is for you or not.