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the only thing I can complain about is the slow updates but it is always worth the wait. very thrilling and descriptive makes it easy to get lost in the story.
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It's very very nice most like novel
I will realy love this novel
Thank for Yahiya nizar. Congratulations
I didn't play lol so after reading synopsis and some reviews (who didn't even read few chapters). I was going to skip. Because of past experience ( there is some good novel badly reviewed by people's because they wanted to select their fav novel without even reading few chapters eg: notebook of fortune, luckiest man, game of life ( bad cover picture and same cover picture as bad novel showed before)).
After reading free 39 chapters I actually enjoyed this novel.even though I confused few times bcoz lol terms. Mc is not op and system power is very balanced. And mc has no equipment until now and I don't think author will make him op soon. Just try it may be you guys like it
Read 20 chaoters : The premise and concept of this novel is good and well written. The only thing I can't accept is the author's blatant use of words which are contradictory.
1) He tells the 5 year kid is as mature as a youngster then that means he should be as matured as an adult when he turns 10.But the author writes that Belle and MC plays around when she visits him.
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I like this novel, with slow Pace and the MC is not to oveepowered at the beginning, and he must scrap materials from zombies he kill to unlock the fitures of STEIN, hope the author can write this novel to the end :) happy reading ;)
for a 19 year old who transfer to another world the MC behaves like 10 year old who only knows the world is black and white even after he was told to keep his powers a secret on 2 different occasions.
Book is a little slow paved for me. You don't really get much world background and the Mc is just way to dumb. I understand he is from the country but if he got into a decent college which seems to be the case he shouldn't be this stupid and clueless.
Honestly the best VR novel I have read, and I have read a lot of these. Some key things I’d like to point at that are done well. -The MC uses the knowledge from his reincarnation logicallyOne of the big things that grates on me in other reincarnation novels is the MC not capitalizing on knowing the future markets to make money since it just isn’t logical. This novel on the other hand does a great job. Another great point is how power scaling is done in this novel. Typically novels in this genre will have the MC gaining insane advantages but still having trouble and barley scraping by against a bunch of players. Authors do things like stalling the characters growth or making endless enemies at slightly lower levels, however in this novel the MC faces logical challenges and setbacks. There are no cliche one dimensional characters that just serve to further the word count. The author does a great job making the challenges logical, higher level NPCs, people searching for his location, and a very intricate plot. Probably the best thing about this novel however is the lack of plot holes. I don’t know how the author does it but with a constantly entertaining plot and nothing contradicting 10/10. I will complain however :( the chapters are too short. I’m currently all caught up with privlage chapters at 221 but waiting a week for ~13 chapters and then finishing them in a bit over an hour makes me sad. If you read this review please add a few hundred more words per chapter :) :) :) or maybe even double the length lol :) :)
