It has a dungeon vibe, but thats all. The writing is weird sometimes, with typos there and there, the characters are bidimensional and the story goes too fast, making any evolution in characters akward. The main character is a secondary character and the story is writen in first person in present, a curious choice, but also harder to use. To be fair I only read a third of the book, mainly because a got bored. Is very light, but this factor is more of a personal taste. The main character is also extremly naive, and aparently everyone is. If you want a light non complex dungeon "theme" novel, this would do the trick, but not very good otherwise.
trash of a mc..................................................................................................................................
Cool concept! Though I've read novels where pirates are included in the story, they weren't heavily focused. Only an arc. But it seems that the author plans a grand novel here for Shiro.(btw, names are Eric, Kylle, Ria, Shawn then boom, Shiro was named to him. )Not sure if it's due to the unidentified woman's backstory.Anyway, good story. easy to read. not wordy. I like third pov as well. i dont really read first pov. thanks for that.keep it up.
Liked. ..........
It's my first time reading this type of novel and honestly, it's captivating how the Author narrates the story with perfection it is excellent how the author has described the real situation some of the events were informative Keep up the good work author
I am of course going to rate the book of my friends book high but not perfect. They have a lot to improve on and would like to hear feedback that is not just criticism but constructive criticism and advice.
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I never actually read this book im just trying to get exp so yeah. Did you know that flags take up multiple characters? ????????.
It's a great concept but, sadly, it has been very poorly executed (I think an 8 yr old could have written it better)Crazily fast-paced progression makes his "accomplishments" seem uninterestingly mediocre at best...The fact that he becomes a man-slut as soon as he gets "powers" just makes it even more boring to read...Closing Remark(s): This novel isn't worth the effort it would take to think of one...
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Alright, an update for my shameless review. I'll be deleting my other author review since that would be unfair if I just left it like that. I'm not petty.Anyway, first things first, this fiction got contracted. Good side, I'll be posting about 2 chaps a day again, continuously, for four months and probably for the rest of the fic. (I need that MGS) Bad side, for the free readers that is, I'll be going premium (locking chapters) once I get to a satisfactory amount of chapters (a.k.a. 100+ chaps) and locking it at around maybe vol 2, or 3, depends on how long vol 2 will be since the Civil War arc will be a long journey.I need to get some money for my family somehow in this trying times... Screw covid-19...Second, this fic will be getting darker and darker as it progresses, not because I want to, but because of the world I built when I was brainstorming ideas for the fiction... It may not be now, but in the future, it will.How my brain comes up with these ideas, I never know... I already have a portion of the map from making it on inkarnate! I'll share the link once it's done.Lastly... There is no lastly... All I can do is implore you, please read the book.
Before I start reading the sequel, this 5-star review is just for the love and respect I have for this masterpiece's prequel, a genuine review will be posted once I read up to 200 chapters at the very least and I hardly believe it would be less than 4 (P.S.: all thanks to the phenomenal skills of our dear author). Until then thank you, author.