[林雪涵: Lin = Forest (Last Name), Xue = Snow & Han = Tolerant]
Her other hand moves in for a punch, but I quickly grab it, her right leg rising up to kick my head, but I stopped it in mid air with Telekinesis before it hit my face. With nothing working, she starts struggling in my grasp.
The best way he could serve Ahea was… in the end - abandoning this mission and focusing on the task he had right now. If he thought back on it, when August and Leum were conversing just when he came, it seemed like Leum was the one convincing August of taking him as a familiar. If the Dragon of fate did so, then it was fate that brought him here and he had to do his part.
"Who're you! What'd you want!
Can we just get another translator for g his novel? It is basically butchered by this "translator" who has not updated for two weeks. He/She does not deserve the premium. What a greedy bastard.
I'm reviewing my novel because I think it has a lot of potential
Kinda worried about their story. I mean he killed her brother and father and she also killed his people. But then again how could she fell in love with her family murderers. Worried but excited because from Auxilary chapter also saw how she won't be bending for his love. She is fighting back and that too very well!
This novel is unforgettable. Even after not reading weeks/months at a time, the story and characters stay with me. It's beautifully written, and I can recall it vividly without needing to reread. It has just enough consistency without having to stress about little character developments and introducing enough new characters. For a working adult with not much time to read -I am satisfied reading every chapter. Great work.
Best Thing To Ever Hit Webnovel, Hahahahah.Read as Qi Jiafu navigates the treacherous landscape of court politics, he finds himself embroiled in a complex web of deceit and ambition. The story portrays the manipulative nature of the ministers and generals as they battle it out over Western Xiang.
I thought of this if he can control the shape of his plants he can use sharpen to increase their damage Example: shape a plant in the shape of a spear sharpen the tip to increase penetrationExample: make traps to kill the monsters more easily by luring them in to dogged upped holes
Decided to be shameless and post a five star review, just cause I can lol.Kidding aside, hope you guys out there do try the novel out. It still has problems and kinks I need to work on, but I'm confident enough to guarantee that the grammar is above average, despite my weakness in using punctuation marks hehe.It's SciFi and Fantasy mashed together, but with a twist. It has Mecha too. Do check it out. And please leave some reviews if you have the time. I'll appreciate some feedback. Any kind of feedback! I'm that desperate lol. Cheers y'all.
I very much enjoyed reading this one, and it was an instant library add for me. I loved all the punchy lane-changes in the first chapter.Has all of my favorite genres rolled into one, so it grabbed my attention straight away. I also enjoyed the voice of the author, which I found to be crisp and clear with a refreshing undercurrent of comedic impact. Only feedback is being nitpicky over grammar issues that may be a distraction for some, but it didn’t detract from my enjoyment. Grab onto a native English editor and it would just help to button-up the great work you have.