Aiden45
I am here; you are here; you know what you need to do. Go all my comrades, for we shall wage this siege shall end the blockade. Pitiful are these who decry us. We shall see where the end of this war begins :(:)
pure trash. for starters it is unreadable with all the errors and Grammer problems. if I'm going to pay to read something I don't want to feel like I'm proofreading a third graders creative writing project. 2nd I already read this book but it was written by Jksmanga WTH the only original part is the cat. how does stuff like this get signed and then shoved down our thoughts in recommended novels? this should be taken down error corrected and then blacklisted for plagerism
Okay so... With the two tags being #Reincarnation and #System, you can pretty much guess half of the story w/o actually reading it. But I digress...With 35 chapters up while I’m writing this review, I can honestly say it’s all the same cliche that you’ve read over and over in other novels of the same type. But that’s why we read it, don’t we? Nothing to write home about as of yet, but things at this stage are usually subject to change, be it for worse or better. If you’re looking for something different... Tough luck. Oh and by the way, I don’t have anything against the author YET. But it reeks of inexperience, I’d recommend cutting down the amount of chapters per week to increase the quality and then after it grows, increase the chapter amount. But it’s all just my own opinion. So take it with a grain of salt.
This story is also epic in scale like "Ancient Godly Monarch" so I am surprised it is so low in the rankings. Good thing for readers like me who can't buy spirit stones but I do feel bad for the talented author.
I really like this novel but at 29-31 it takes a turn for the worst. As Julius was a god before and even was in the process of devloping his IDEA before being reincarnated. So being hit by an arrogant book is so RUBBISH author please get your story together ianti his soul powerful enough to reflect the books damage. But overall I think it's a GOOD book if you like this kind of novel
Is it just me or Shi Hao’s innocent trait changing to shameless one happened too fast? I was reading it and i loved how the little guy, even though he lost his supreme bone and everything he deserves, He still manged to retain his pure heart, forgiving attitude and innocent thinking thats why the Deity Tree liked him but then after a few chapters he suddenly turned into a shameless, lustful and revenge-seeking devilish brat. I was really surprised when it happened, i thought i skipped some chapters or something.Shi hao didnt harass the first batch of girls that came into the story Unlike the latter ones. In fact he was portrayed as a pure and innocent little guy and when girls come they adore him as a cute and innocent child but then after travelling,he somehow changed and every girl he sees gets harassed verbally. You know the fatty(boobs and butt) thingy. Like he wants to bring a girl to his village and raise her to be a fatty so that he can have his favorite milk and have a baby.i dont see the reason how he became like that. Is it puberty? I mean he didnt encounter a seducing woman or something to trigger that change right?I loved the innocent shi hao and shameless shi hao im not against it or something, in fact i love it but at least give a reason or event that justifies his traits turning into a different one.Anyway its a good story!! ❤️ If you love OP shotas then you gotta read this!!
Although it starts out as the regular hint novel i like that it’s starting to branch into the bigger world by adding different races towards the end. Looking forward to the wars and battles between races good luck.
everything is great , except the updates...i want moreee pleaseeeeeee14000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000
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Potential harem warning, and with tsunderes. The tactics employed by the MC are rash and with little logic, such as letting the Gnolls attack at night despite them having night vision because "If they want a fight, give it to them" logic that only serves to "bolster" MC's image to the viewer. Plot armor is also a thing, and non of the town building stuff goes indebt despite all the screens, like why the towns people he summoned don't question anything after suddenly coming to existence, people from actual Greek suddenly came onto shore and just acted like nothing happened and followed the MC just cause. Author also doesn't know any real history, as apparently the only thing he watched was 300 and thinks that all Spartans just wear red robes, when they wore a chest guard and helmet; in this novel MC also makes Spartans throw javelins and then rush with daggers, which is just wrong on so many levels, like how Spartans never carried daggers, or how they mainly fought in formation with and didn't just bum rush with these so called daggers, they had swords, but not daggers. The translation is also pretty bad, sentences just stop for some reason without any context and words are freely swapped around, what's worse is that numbers are also swapped, like in the beginning MC is saved by Spartans, then when showing town info it says he has 0 spartan soldiers, then later says he has 80. These are only some of the issues affecting this novel, it's a novel you'd force yourself to read once you can't find anything else. It had a decent start with a semi-smart MC not thinking with his dick and actually having some form of planning, then it became a Lords Empire.
I fell in love with the book the moment i picked it up, now it may just be the fact that I have a biased opinion about warlocks but i will say the story does start out great and only gets better. The way they gain power in the game is awesome and only makes you feel even more amazed throughout the rest of the story!
