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isn't thiswizard: starting with the knights breathing method?why change its name to this
The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.
Personally couldn't make it past the first few chapters. The MC was poorly characterised and was thrown into a gunfight in the first 5 minutes of the novel, only to show "poor aim" headshots and killing 20 people by the end of the 2nd chapter completely on his own.
Give this one a miss, there have to be better ones out there than this.
Personally, I prefer these kinds of plot where the MC is not a dumb retard who goes around forgiving people. I like how he's scheming and shameless lol
If you guys like such novels, definitely give this one a read. You won't regret it.
This is actually a pretty good story. It started up very slow. Very hard-working MC as a grasshopper climbing the food chain and emotional story telling that can make a man cried little bit .
I dont want to nitpick to much but the fact the the children speak so eloquently and can semmingly articulate everything well at that age is a little off putting. An example would be the teacher not blinking an eye at a 5 year old saying standardized or being able to introduce themselves professionally.
Otherwise great.
can anyone recommend me similar books related to budha or evil budha cultivation .......... . .
Bring back my banana.............. You guys are Greedy as f. Please bring back my banana or I wont spent a single cent of my money on your stupid Coins.
Honestly, I was hoping for more from this story. I generally enjoy the cliche of a weakling getting a cheat and becoming powerful. But this story is just mediocre as of chapter 60. Maybe it gets better later on, but I haven’t looked at any reviews from other people, so I don’t know.
The translation / editing quality seems to be excellent (very few or no English grammar or spelling mistakes). I can’t speak to the translation accuracy, but the story flows and is coherent. 5/5.
The story itself, however, is just meh. The pacing feels rushed. The elders have the same cultivation strength as some inner disciples. Etc etc. 2.5/5.
Overall, 3.5/5. It is readable and can help pass the time, but there are tons of other web novels that are more enjoyable to me, so I won’t be voting for this one.
First of all, this is stupid. Immortal cultivation run on some sort of energy from world. So, you are dead if you are in a void where there is no energy for you to stop. In that regard, martial arts are more reliable that they are breaking your limits not borrowing strength from the world to work around limits. Second, by cultivating, you are absorbing energy of the world, meaning, you are giving yourself to the world for longevity. So, you are just a glorified slave of the world. Sure, in your world, you will be pretty strong but what if you are in another world? You would just be some ordinary guy. Third, you are limiting yourself. You can only advance when heaven allow you to whereas martial artists can break through with enough hard work.
0-0 Listen to me......this novel is too good. >< Bro this novel makes you want to spend fast pass or coins. -_- Other novels make me sometimes yawn or go on other apps while I'm reading. This novel is was so good that I wasted more than one hundred fast passes and create 5 more accounts to get 15 faster passes daily. WHYYYYY DID THE AUTHOR MAKE THIS A PREMIUM NOVEL> I hate/love the author. Also, the author should post the original photo of the MC. Also, the author shouldn't make this a harem novel. I don't want to see the pure, innocent, naive child be a Casanova. (0)_(0)
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