Day 1 of requesting the author to continue this awesome novel. Plzzzzzzzzzz upload at least 1 chapter per day.
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sooooooooo....is the mc like yami and gaw and the other one?if yes then i will read it from my heart ...if not then i will read it anyway because i love your stories ??
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Overall, it's pretty good and definitely a fun read. The system isn't the most helpful or very complex but I'm still in the early stages of the story. Instead of flooding readers with a bunch of information, the author makes the smart choice to push on with the narrative.Kite is a likable protagonist. He's sympathetic, since he was thrown into a game-like world out of nowhere one day and in the body of someone who is low level. He works hard to get himself ahead and the story already has some nice lady characters if you enjoy some intimacy between characters. The only issues I had with the story were the tense changes in the middle of sentences. Most of the time, instead of using can or can't, use could or couldn't. Otherwise, I recommend the story, it's pretty good. With a little bit of editing I'm sure it'll do even better in the future.
A very nice and interesting story to read. And quite fun too. I myself would wholeheartedly recommend this piece of work :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
Seems to me that you have a pretty nice list of things that should happen to the MC. But you don’t really have much to connect it and make it flow.Ex. You created and killed a character in 2-3 chapters just to give John his cheat.For other readers, this should be a read for those who just want to see a Op character screwing around with common sense. Purely for comedy and fun laughs
This is my favorite book, although there are a few things that have wrong grammar, mainly at the start of the book. If the author could maybe go back and edit it with the skills they gained while writing the rest of the book, that would most likely be appreciated by newer readers. Awesome book would recommend reading! : )
Why do you vote for these trash novels? This is a (bad) novel site, not a fan-fic filled forum/chan. If I wanted to see fan-fic I would go to anywhere else where those are free and a plenty.
I kinda like it... I love the idea behind it... and I really want to read it... but it just does not strike a cord with me. I have read 23ch... and I had to force myself to read it for the last 10 ish chapters. I just don't like that the colonists are experiencing hardships at every corner... nothing feels like it's going right for them. Even though it probably will work out in the end. It doesnt feel like progress is being made and that makes the story feel very slow paced and thus boring. Everything else about the story is fine, the grammar, the style of writing is ok, the world building really feels like it will lead to something great with all the little tidbits that are beeing dropped. It is just that the story does not grab my attention and nothing so far has been something that would make me feel excited/happy for the MC or his colonists... everything that happened so far just made me feel worried and anxious or just straight up disinterested. For every step that is made it feels like they make 2 steps back and that some new problem arises.Well I have rated it highly because I do think that it is a novel with an interesting premise... and that it will probably lead up to something very interesting later when the colony grows and when, I'm guessing, we get a more of a kingdom building aspect which I always find enjoyable. Tho I don't want to torture myself reading something I don't find interesting just to get to something interesting after 200 chapters. Good Luck with the story!
I don't usualy post reviews, but this time I am making an exeption.If you wanna get mad, then this is a book for you.If you want a story that constantly says how good it is, that is just typical stuff with no inovation, and a story where the thing in the title is barrely used, then this story is also for you.also, I think this is a translations so the standard chinese nationalism and weirdly translated saying's apply here as well
So far its actually been pretty interesting. Its more logical then I expected and explains most of the decision. For a trail read over I think its pretty solid. Not sure how it will develope though.