Came looking out for copper, but I found gold.I checked out the story as I liked the cover (author has changed it to a new one), but I stayed due to the story. Though the author should work on a catchy title for the novel, I liked the story so far. Especially the little interactions between the MC and his family.
This book is pure gold. Two Teachers, two students, and two systems. Author you are a amazing writer. Keep it up. I wish you good luck my friend.
The story is suspenseful awesome horror thriller story with many characters.the story also contains the specification of the places situations which makes the story more realistic.
Hate after chapter pet and stopped reading it.......................Mc is dominated with her biggest weakness first time that was found out easily.
I enjoy the story, and I enjoy the plot. It would be better if you could use the grammar checkers like Grammarly or type in Microsoft Word or Google Docs because they automatically point out the grammatical mistakes. Overall, the story is amazing.
I made my way through the prologue! And here’s my thoughts so far.There’s definitely plot, and it’s a big one with universes and powerful entities and everything. So if you like the big guys with the big powerfulness, this is pretty good. There’s also lots of terminology, but that’s common in cultivation novel. I easily get bored reading the descriptions of those, but that’s just me. If you’re used to cultivation reading and like cultivation descriptions, the author does a great job. It shows how much thought and effort he placed in it.There’s a lot of characters and I can see each of their traits. Each of them are interesting.There are little grammatical errors here and there, but continous writing will improve it. So far, I enjoy it. It’s not my cup of tea unfortunately, but I know its the cup for cultivation lovers. Give the novel a chance, and I’m sure you’ll find the reading pleasant after a few chapters.
SO I was reading through comments in the trial Read saying to bring this book back I read this and its AMAZING :) I hope they release more chapters aswell
Although it's my first time reading a book in this genre, I must say you portrayed all descriptions accurately. The world background, the game description and inside the game everything seems real. Nice work author. Keep up the good work.
Reviews brought me here but the chapters are very little.........keep up the hard wirk auther san☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺?????????????????
Honestly this story is so intriguing that I just can't stop reading. Every character has a motivation and aren't blindly following the MC giving rise to true bonds showing us the bonds and not just telling us about them.
Good story but too bad it stopped adding more chapters, good plot and character building. Way too short and it was left at a good spot so I'm a little disappointed
Writing is good, nice and interesting plots, in chapter 3 and can't stop reading. Good Job here author