The plot develops well throughout the chapter and the picture created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline. As a reader i got sinked in this world the Author had created. A fascinating escape from reality into another world. A great read.waiting for new chapter ??
It's nice that it intrigues me as a reader.. I've been waiting for a year now as I presume that the author haven't prolong the writing... or maybe starts a pace, I surmise? Yet hoping for the next chapters. ?
The novel looks nice though I have a question is there a romance in the novel?........................................................................................................................................................................................................
TL;DR: It’s bad.The story is bad but the bad translation makes it even worse. The main character is also pretty stupid and other characters are also unrealistic. Futhermore the main character’s attitude towards other countries makes me believe the story will get racist in the future.Let’s start with my first problem. Why is the prettiest and smartest girl in class suddenly defending him despite having no relation prior? The main character even says they never had much to do with each other so why?She even chooses to risk her future to go to the same world for him. Obviously with more people going to the same world the more competition there would be. Yet she still chooses to follow him even after he ignores her act of kindness to resolve the grudge between him and a young master.He states publicly that he’ll ruin the young master and his family despite having nothing to do so (didn’t have his overpowered system yet). Seeing this, I had already see the massive plot armor he’ll have to save him from his stupidity.The body he reincarnates into is broke and his girlfriend is just ditching him. Yet he shaves and becomes a massive hunk immediately attracting a bunch of girls. They state he’s hotter than some models so why couldn’t the body’s owner be one? We’re given no further information of his previous life before he powers up to the strongest person on the planet in a second. It’s like the poor circumstances weren’t even there.The young master holding a grudge on the main character for 10 years is also pretty stupid. You’d think he’d get smarter being in a large family for 10 years. He apparently made his family stronger and is also stated to be cunning. His actions really don’t show that though.
I like the stpry but there are two mood points. One is the wordpadding, the story gets streched till its breaking point. At some points of time I skipped multiple pages, because the author just kept repeating himself.The other mood point is the regressing translation quality. After chapter 60-80 the quality takes a noticable dive. Translations for specific things get changed multiple times per chapter, words that don't seem to belong into sentenced and many more. It feels like the typical MTL errors that were forgotten to correct. A shame because at least 80 percent of those errors could have been corrected by simply reading through chapter once more before releasing.
I only read up to chapter 3, but I want to reward the author with 5 stars for some reason:First, the cover is very eye-catching. I'm pretty sure it will attract more readers to read this book.Second, the synopsis is on point and simple. It's easy to understand.Third, when I started reading this book, I could see the author's hard work. The author's way to describe the scenes is so majestic. I could imagine the scenes right away. I didn't find any typo. The writings are so neat and well-structured. I like how the author executed the first-person POV too. It's so natural and interesting.Lastly, I wish all the best for the author and this book. Go get gold! ???
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Writing a review for your own book is not easy, so I'll just say a few things. Also, if you have any questions about the novel, you can leave them in the comments!
- "First of all, what is this book about?" It's about a guy named Sunny who lives in a dystopian future where some people are forced to periodically visit a magical world and battle terrible monsters. If they survive, they receive special powers.
- "What type of guy is Sunny?" He is a cynical, disillusioned young man with a bleak outlook on life. But! He has a sense of humor and a strong desire to not only survive but also thrive in this world. You'll like him, I promise.
- "Will he be overpowered?" Not really. He will certainly become powerful, but not powerful enough to steamroll over his enemies. Every victory Sunny achieves will be won with cunning, hard work, and skill. So, more of a Dark Souls type of situation.
- "Will there be romance?" Yes, but a slow one.
- "Romance, you say! So... a harem? There is a harem, right?" Not really. Sunny will be surrounded by a lot of beautiful people, both male a female, but he will probably only have one romantic relationship. Uh... one at a time, at least. We'll see!
- "How often are you updating?" Currently, I'm dedicated to writing one chapter every day. The amount may increase in the future, but it depends on a lot of factors.
- And, finally... "Aren't you too full of yourself? You rated your book five stars!" What can I say, it's a great book. One of the best books I've ever written! I've only written one other book, but still. It's definitely one of the top two best books I've written in my life. If you don't believe me, check for yourself ;)
This is an interesting story and I thank you for writing it. The use of the odds was inspired but the use of the thieves was questionable to me. If you have something planned for them I look forward to it.
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