"Good, another genius, old people sure are knowledgable."
Saying this she left the room and went upstairs.
Bishou tried to struggled but Leo doesn't budge at all even though Bishou is struggling. Amorette then imbues Bishou with a something.
Chang Xiuying got confused for the last time as to where the people are right now? They're still not home which puzzled her more. They were never this late.
"Okay, this is chase really," Ambre concluded.
Author randomly gave out a spoiler about the novel's conclusion. Appears to be a novel about politics in the middle ages. Dunno whether or not there are any fantasy elements. It's probably good? But if you're gonna read a novel full of political schemes and criminal masterminds why read this? That's all I'm saying.
Please update. I really really really like this story. ??
Ive read 47 chapters so far. This story is pretty entertaining. However my biggest issue is the lack of detail.. especially involving sexual things between the MC and the witches. Its simply a waste of potential. Its not enjoyable. Just a bunch of hints at what they are doing instead of giving the readers juicy scenes. Kind of lame.
I have also just read the first few chapters yet but I can see a lot of potential in your story.I'm not the biggest fantasy fan however I think that many people, who like fantasy, would enjoy this novel as the setting and the plot are very intriguing.Just like the others already pointed out, there are a few grammar errors but all in all I didn't see it as a big problem. Aside from that, I like your writing style:)I will continue reading this so keep it up author!
C'est l'auteur ici, je donne 5 étoile a mon roman ( c'est normal non ? ?? ). C'est mon premier roman donc vous trouver quelque faute au début, et merci de me signaler les erreurs et donner votre avis ca va beaucoup m'aider.
Writing at the start is rough , really rough. Stuck through it as there are edits here and there that hint at better writing to come. What killed it for me though was the character progression. Just jumps all over thr place and really killed the enjoyment for me. I really wanted to like this book as the premise seems great but the execution really doesn’t make this worth reading. And certainly not worth using stones on.
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