"Did you see how many I killed? At least twenty. If you can just kill this one then you can be like me." She said switching from the stick to the carrot, coaxing Sasha into it. "C'mon Sasha, what if you need to protect Liz?"
While this was happening, Goda felt a raging sensation on his back and after immediately it left and that Alter suddenly stopped crying and stood up and hugged Goda and merged with him.
With a sigh she entered her room, Henry following, and went to her desk. She sat and began to frantically drawl her quill across the page. After tossing two or three drafts to the side she finally looked down at her work satisfied. "Henry, be sure my father sees this one."
Takashi smiled in satisfaction and turned around
*Smack*
The one who entered Emily's residence was none other than Han, one of the Three assassins who approached Stigma and had tried to recruit him.
"Alright, enough talk, we have to enact her banishment, come on princess, and if you are coming Edmond, then you can freely follow." (Guard)
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interesting........Added to library .......
Well, now that you have released around ten chapters I think I can give you an opinion.... I really like the story, I would have thought it was basic but I don't get the impression. You have a writing style of your own that I find great (you push your style very far in the last chapters that I read, I love it) The characters are very endearing and they have a personality of their own (even if I have impression that you are hiding a lot from us) and your author's notes are very funny. That's why I give you 5 stars for everything EXCEPT for the stability of updates... Indeed, you come out too randomly. However, you told us that you are trying to stabilize your posts and I am sure that you will succeed, so if you succeed I will really give you 5 stars! good luck, I can't wait for real, to read more!!
The chapters are really well written. I like this story a lot. The pace of the story is very well balanced nor it is slow neither it is fast. The story is based on martial arts x kingdom building universe ( my guess could be wrong) from the hint provided in chapters. Well built world and characters so far, clear motives and schemes, not just stupid characters deserves the high-iq tag.
This story is good and it has good potential, I just hope the author updates more often, I was a bit disappointed in the first chapoters when he was hesitatnt to kill