The grammar can be fixed and I can look around it due to the story being good!
Its interesting, but could have had more comedy??...but anyways its interesting, looking forward to more chapters .....the story line is Lit
Interesting, but style and grammar are not the author's forte. His writing style is all over the place, falling prey to traps like "But that's a story for another time."Also, the main character doesn't seem to behave like a wise sage would.
so far this story is great, i am already voting for the stability of updates but i ll reserve my final judgment on that point ,i have read in one go the 13 chapters available at that time,the main character seems like a real guys (even if OP in martial arts) the background of the game world is really deep and we discover a part of it in each chapter , it's really a selling point on my part, haven't seems much side character but they seemed realistic so far.really a great start for a story my overall score will be updated (if possible because it's my first review) as long as the quality and the enjoyment are of the same quality as the beginning !really a great work on the author part, thank you!
I came here because of the nice pic, but I stayed because of the interesting story. The story is simply at the start chapter 3, but it has intrigued me. It was actually able to pull me away from continuing writing my own novels. P.S don't tell my readers I was here. Just taking a breather with this nice story. :)
Hello, Shameless author here, first time writing a fanfic after being on webnovel for about three months now, didn't even know how to write and post my chapter using it, just uploaded the first complete one today, I accept advice in how to write and how can improve my work. Thanks
Love the bookGreat writingLove the story lineWill they fall in love? Hope soLove the mysterious vibe Faris gives offCan't wait for more
My honest review of the story so far. (Chapter 39)Writing Quality: Below averageIt started off pretty amazing. I have to say the introduction was fantastically written. The writer must have worked really hard and gotten many references for its superb introduction. However, due to the beginning being so good, as you read past that, the terrible grammar that comes afterward becomes incredibly glaring. hopefully, the good introduction helps keep the readers from turning away.Personally, it's very difficult for me to read a story when I can't help noticing the mistakes. The main thing to work on is probably the usage of present and past tense. Grammar mistakes are abundant of course. Also, for some reason, the writer always write the 'i' for 'its(it's)' in capital letters.It bothers me.Stability of Updates: Five stars all around!It could be fast or slow, I'll give full marks. Personally, I am a quality over quantity type of person. So if posting fast updates compromises your quality, i think it's better to go at your own pace so that you're actually satisfied with what you write. :)Story Development: GreatThe story's pacing is actually quite good. they give you time to understand the characters properly before jumpstarting all the action. Thus we as readers are able to emphasize with their hardships more.Character Design: ExcellentI surprisingly like how the author wrote the story on the main lead. He feels like he has a lot of depth. There are many layers to his character, reasons for his aspirations, and believable obstacles to achieving them. I love a story of characters straying from the main path so it's a big plus as well.World Background: Good While it's not fantasy or cultivation, it's a realistic world that is closer to home. set in the poor area of the Philippines, it gives us readers an eye-opening view of how the poor area of said country actually works and how the people their are struggling.Conclusion:I think this is a really well thought out novel from a down to earth writer. While it may be difficult for non-philippine readers to understand some of the nuances (me included), it has a lot of depth and heart. Although I do hope that my dear writer really works on his/her grammar. I have to say I'm really proud of my fellow South East Asian writers :DAlthough I'm not Filipino, I'm a Malaysian and love my neighbors <3I hope we all succeed! :)
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Loving the book book so far. Author will the MC have a love interest.///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Great book truly. No Cap ?.Keep up the good work Author..........................................................................................................................