Ivan87
this is a very cool story. I really like the main character's struggle to be strong. He looks so cool. I hope he becomes strong.
What's going on?This novel only has 60 chapter and is already discontinued for a year!!clearly a chashgrab or a filler... completely useless novel
Finished up to current MTL (~200 chapters). The author recommends a racist novel under some of his chapters (Global Reincarnation).The story improves as time goes on, still simple to follow, not much depth so far but potential is there, the fightning part is good, mixed with trending theme and ideas executed in a fresh way it's quite fine to read, more so if you ignore its obvious flaws. We're there just to have some fun.Characters are rather weak in logic and behavior, seem have the minds of teenagers, they don't have that natural, lifelike flow, independence, you can see they're limited by the author's writing skills. MC feels like a small kid telling obvious lies or bad excuses yet his "parents" - stronger, older people - believe him, they don't question, don't get suspicious, don't test him cleverly. King doesn't feel like a king, but a reincarnated teenager acting as a king. But it's still an improvement compared to that tasteless mob in TLM so I'll take it.Expected more from the author of TLM. Actually, if I didn't know it's him, I would think it's some newbie chinese author who's a little capable at writing. Should get more spicy and fat though, since the story hasn't really progressed that much in the first 200 chapters. But so far it is at it is.
The story is not bad, I'm on chapter 14 and I still can't understand several things.For example, he is in an academy protected by a great mutant, but some policemen with a robot decide to attack them, I don't understand the thought of trying to defeat such a powerful mutant with policemen.Second, apparently it's normal to kill each other at school, I don't know if it's a satire of the United States or what.Third, a student is able to infiltrate an intelligent humanoid beast capable of murdering students, let's remember that we are in a school with powerful mutants.Fourth, upon "dying" he wakes up in a Battle Royale, and apparently an administrator tries to kill him for no reason, which is then turned into an MMORPG-like game.And that I'm only going for chapter 14.I think the story has potential, but it needs to correct several things.
An excellent foundation. A specific format of text should be used for the interaction between him and the system. Hopefully he'll be able to call upon a skill exclusive to pets after a significant evolution. It would be great if mc will be able to fight as well.
Hey author-San wanted to leave a review as well as a question I have…. First my question who is the main female lead, and the romance when we gonna see some development with Adam and whoever is gonna be is counterpart or even harem(which I am rooting for here HAREMMMM) (if you can answer that) Next my review as of chapter 32 I love the story so far honestly have no compliants if I had any it would be the “split personality/primordial Authorities” amazing concept just it needs to fleshed out a pit more for me
It’s a great idea and the author has implemented Monster Hunter series perfectly into bnha. My only problem is probably that there isn’t any original big events happening yet. I understand that it’s hard to make an original event when you’re going off a base story but I wish something different would happen. Other than that, development is great and I personally think the quirk is cool af. Good luck writing and post when you can.
This is one of the better slowly developed novels out there on this platform. It’s not too fast pace as with some other novels where other MCs just go * here * and there. This book has one of the best by far character developments and gives you an insight on how really each persons relationship to the MC is. The character development is too a point where you may even feel connected and share feelings with them. Another great thing of this novel is the MC powers and strengths. By that I mean how it is slowly growing from weak to strong but not in a fashion you’d feel like it is “just another” novel, such as the MC actually experiencing failure, issues that prevent him from doing something; basically he has challenges and as a quick summary, overall this is a great novel!
Keep up the great work author! Cool perk is as of this moment, reading this novel is 100% free!
TLDR: Amazing novel with really good character development and his “OPness” isn’t instant which leads to quite an exciting read overall. Give this a try if you haven’t already!
Usual apocalyptic stories are really hard to explain, but you explain it very well??._my favorite line is "Nike is using his jaywalking skills to the maxium" hilariously funny._characters well presented?_the 2 chapter at the beginning have me naruto vibes??As for suggestions there's none really but keep your story understandable when it comes to action parts.
The story, characters, and background are pretty okay. It’s just the translation that needs more work.jeuishhdhjdjiijdjdidjidjehuodihehhduid
Truly a wonderful novel, pls support!!!!! Read the first couple of chapters the summary might seem not that good but The novel is worth it!
