Well then, I am not the biggest reader of system type of stories or isekai, but I do read a few like Shield hero, Arifureta, Re:zero, or Overlord.
With that said let's begin, shall we.
First off, the setting, it's very well done and quite the attention grabber right from the start, now the characters they are well made, well written, engaiging and funny!
Now, the writting is good, but it needs work grammar wise (and don't get the wrong idea, I am a strong believer that bad grammar, dosen't hinder a story, nor renders it like many say "unreadable" That is not something that in my opinion hinders a good story and it can be fixed with ease, and me too I make mistakes, lot's of them)
All in all, this is a good story with great potencial, and don't let the few grammar mistakes will ruin it for you!
As for the Author keep it going, my friend you have something good here!
Obligatory five star review by a shameless author, this is the first time I am writing something without any magic, super powers and systems. I just hope that it doesn't fall flat because I kind of enjoy writing it.
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an exciting tale about a man and his road through acknowledging, understanding and accepting his fate, his mission across lives and time, and how he is not alone in it.
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We're going on this little journey with Marco and I can't wait to see where it leads .I'm really curious about Ayesha and him as well, that's going to be interesting .I'm really enjoying reading this book.The way the author describes everything makes it really easy for me to envision it all.I generally love learning random stuff so I'm also enjoying the little words and meanings at the end of most chapters .I've got high hopes for the story so good luck to you
I love the world background, the power and types, I really love, there's nothing to say on this novel if his writing is average his mind and thinking and creating world background is awesome. I also like the plot when a tamer step unto the path of tamer, they will be cursed by the world.
Its unexpectedly really good. It has kingdom building like Release that Witch, but without harem so far and more detail on the war scene. I heard multiple point of view from human race will took too many chapters. if its interesting like Overlord, it will be nice.
looked interesting and fresh for a few chapters. but i guess a bunch of idiots spamming comments about how it didn't fit the usual troupes and them believing that is how the world should work forced the author to change the novel into a generic cultivation one.
I Read a part of the first chapter of this novel like 2 years ago i believe and this is the first time im seeing the translation on webnovel so ill try it again
This a good stuff promote this guys
Hopefully i will be picked its a decent story