Instead of some op Brain super hacker do what he wants you get mc so boring that you feel pity and boredom. Only withstand 19 ch and I go kill myself for such wasted time after writing this. 2/10. Word suck mc suck more game elements suck the greatest.
Lots of POV switches and A/N. But, besides that, it is a good story so far. I really like the world and how you incorporate the power system.
The story is interesting; however, the author writing skill is mediocre... A lot of confusion and time skipping. The layout and is a bit unclear. The story contains some humor, but the story itself does not float well... It is a decent novel, hope The Author skills can improve and bring the novel up a few notch.
I like this type of novel, like IRAS, i hope you continue doing it, do not stop updating the novel plz, good luck author. .......................
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It is actually a gem that I have finally found in webnovel . The stories are pretty interesting and quite scary . These stories can give to goosebumps and you will get addicted to it. There's a request please please please update the chapters I want to read more
Interesting but slow paced. I am waiting for the rest of the story to unfold. There are things that are puzzling especially in Emma's case. One may question how and why her story began on hear deathbed. Over all, im glued!
Intresting story. I hope it will stay like that in later chapters. I think it would have been better if you used china names like Yi Xiao Yun Feng Zhao Chu Che Lin Ling and other. I just read so many china novels its wierd to see different names.
Will MC keep his ruthlessnes from his past life?
I dont want him to be soft hearthed.
Hey everybody, author here, this is my maiden voyage with a novel. A lot what you read will be edited (imperfectly) by me so I only implore you to read and give me any feedback and reviews you can on Evolve... And thank you for taking the time to read.
I just wanted to say, thankyou. Reading a new kind of story really takes the tension off of my day.
I am very immersed in this writing. Although the story has confusing parts, everything is explained as time goes by.
Fantastic work by author.
Honestly, this novel captivates me so much. The writing is nice and fluent, easy to understand. The world background is well developed and the character designing too. I will be waiting for more about this novel, so author we need more
Here is my review. Good writing skill and I can know it since the first chapter. the story is well-built. I suggest you to lock chapter between chapter 35-40