I've read through to chapter 25,and decided to drop it. main reason is that the storyline.. the mc is too overpowered and the world setting is 2d
Translator use chapter repeat to « farm » blatantly credits, too bad the story seemed interesting... I desabonned. Seems to happen a lot nowaday, hope the site do something about it... Report button maybe ?
So, while the story is mostly enjoyable, I have been having trouble with the mindset of the MC. he was raised as an assassin. From 3 years old. While I don't know what a child assassin mindset would be like...I would assume he was trained to be patient, listen, be aware, take in information before acting, and would generally be colder and more indifferent to people. Unfortunately, while he has his moments of brilliance in planning and fighting, his overall attitude, intelligence, social perception, and thoughtfulness are equivalent to some of the worst Japanese isekai protagonist s I have ever read. In other words...he's dumber than a baked potato. Then there are the side characters...everyone has this laissez faire, forgetful attitude that makes it near impossible to treat all but a few of the characters with any sort of seriousness...no matter their importance or power level. That, and the translation quality make me rate this book lower than it could be.
This is a good novel. The characters aren't too annoying. The writing quality is quite good. No grammar issues. It's good way to pass some time
Pretty nice for a first novel, rating should be a 1, but giving it a 3 just because of the dedication.
That being said, its kinda sad how you show no improvement from start to end(most recent chapter).
Looking forward for the next upcoming chapters! consistency and patience are vital in one's success! Keep it up wkwkwkkwkwkwkwkwkwwkwkwkkwkwkwkw
It's a good book, and I will recommend it to people of all ages and genres to at least give it a try, with the only problem being the lack of updates in the last 3 years.
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The author is a very talented individual in the art of character design, able to generate long fluid conversations that seem to go on forever which many novels lack.
In my opinion, however, that is a flaw.
The conversations go on long enough that it starts to give me a headache. The author puts heavy emphasis into the conversations and does not balance it out with the world background.
The author does not seem as good with the world background.
For example, the prince's castle at the beginning is merely referred to as a "castle" with no additional details. I get a mental image when the term is mentioned, but I get a stale one which has no details.
Another example is when the MC is escaping along with her friend, yet most of the writing is down on their conversations rather than their surroundings. In reality, I doubt two people would have the energy to converse when they are fleeing for their life.
Other than that, the author does put in the details when it comes to fighting, so props to that. The writing quality is very good and the author does seem to have a direction he/she wants to go in.
A personal complaint would be the time skip at the beginning not long after the MC arrives into this world. I feel like a lot of potential was wasted in what could have been invested into character growth. It is like saying the MC survived a life or death situation at point A and then somehow got over it and became stronger in the future at point B.
This is merely my opinion however, so just take it as creative criticism. I have not even fully read the novel since I became overwhelmed by the long conversations which take up half of each chapter.
I am thoroughly impressed by how good this story is. The MC is very likable and the action is quite amazing. Looking forward to reading much more from this author. Kudos to your great work.
What?! It's a real "Story" and it's even by I Eat Tomatoes. Finally, webnovel has finally posted a story that's not system isekai...............