I see a story that has a promising future. I hope you don't drop it. I will read it when it passes 300 chapters ............................
Everything from the diction to the storytelling is brilliant, but I feel like the story is a bit fast-paced and would be more enjoyable if you provided context on the characters and their history
Let me just start by saying this isn’t your typical werewolf webnovels! I’ve started plenty of those types of novels and lost interest or got fed up due to a number of things. Firstly, the “bullied all my life”, slave, weak, Omega FL novels which is played out! ??u200d♀️ You won’t find our Violet being weak in this one! She’s strong-willed, courageous and doesn’t take any shit from no one! I also love all the different personalities among the Cardinal Alphas. It’s hard not to love them. (Asher will always be my fave tho?) There’s never a dull moment as the character dynamics is awesome, even with the supporting characters. I’m just absolutely addicted to this and wish I had the money to buy coins at the moment so I could gift you Glimmy and unlock more chapters. Defy the Alphas is a banger! And I can’t wait to continue reading on to find out more!
First ten chapters have proven to be a very good read, I like how the system functions in this novel. I hope the author manages to keep the good pace up. Good luck.
I wonder if it s a translated story from chinese or not?Anyways I like it so far Hope we get more updates As for now I will save up chapters and would write a second review when the story grows up
Just started reading this book. It draws you into the world and makes you root for the mc.
The novel did have evrything to have a great plot, but the Author decides to go with the Harem route, evry time the MC safes someone realy important (fighting capabilities/important background or some super Power) you guess it.... it's a Girl/Women or even a loli, i don't even care over the deus ex machina to Safe the MC or his friends evry time **** hits the fan, but the first time the Author went full deus ex cause the MC was done for, it was mostly done so he could add another women to his harem, so if you like a novel like that enjoy....
It is a good novel. Don't get me wrong. It has good writing quality and adequate world development . But what ticks me off is its ridiculous slow pace development of the MC. MC is very weak at the start. He takes an oath that he would be stronger than everyone so that he could protect his loved ones. But sadly, the MC does very little to get stronger. I have read a lot of chapters and the MC is still a one star mage. The concept of system is very poorly used for the MC's growth. I know the MC is young as compared to his ridiculously overpowered harem members. But at this pace , MC is gonna need atleast 2000 chapters of story development to atleast come close to his harem members powers let alone his enemies . when I read the description of the novel, I thought MC would go to great lengths to increase his power quickly rather than fooling around with his woman who are marginally stronger than him. I am not blaming the author or novel per se. But this is not my type of novel.
Really loving this book so far. Please try updating more.
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"Really Sir? So I was not a homo even though I'm homo? I knew it." Mr. Sangefull answered panicly.
Neha:Good