After reading though 30+ chapter, I think, I better drop this. The game element is truly dump. If someone really open a game like this, it will be closed in a week. It's just like fantasy world that has a game system. Crimes, gores, sexual contents (not happen yet, but a mentioned of allowance by the gamemakers), these happened secretly in the context of the story, and the government don't issue a ban yet.MC don't have anything but kung fu. Kung Fu maniac with out a specific character or goal. A casual and very noob player with an exploited cheat, called Kung Fu skills.The story can be more interesting, if his mage class has at lease a hint to do with a progress of the story aside from being mentioned as a hindrance or a handicap, he has against those with physically related class.Side characters? Aside from the female thief, who possibly be a female lead, there is no one that memorable at all up to this point.
saya sudah membaca hingga chapter 240 Mtlterlalu banyak kekecewaan saya dengan novel ini.ide cerita yang bagus namun dengan eksekusi yang buruk.Bukanhakah dia berasal dari masa depan yang kembali ke masa lalu ?seharusnya dia tau tidak semua orang pantas ditolong, logika keceradas sosialnya seperti anak sekolah dasar.karena dia dari masa depan seharusnya dia tau pentingnya faksi, tapi lihat ini dia merahasiakan Lv dan statusnya di gamen seperti anak sekolah dasar yang berlagak sepeti pahlawan betopeng di komik.banyak hal yang bisa dia capai hilang karena tingkah lakunya.Dengan latar belakang cerita yang mengisahkan orang tua mc mati diserang naga.bagus karena menyarankan orang tua mumbuat akun game, Seharusnya dia tau tingkat keamanan didunia itu sangat menghawatirkan karena akan terjadi perang.dia tidak bisa selalu berada disekitar orang tuanya setiap saat,seharusnya dia menyarankan orang tuanya untuk masuk bermain setidaknya 1 kali dalam seminggu, dengan itu orang tuanya akan naik level, yah walaupun setidaknya maksimal level 1 namun setidaknya ketika orang tua akan pindah kedunia game itu mereka akan memiliki status yang lebih tinggi dari orang tua lainnya atau kebanyakan orang yang bukannya hanya memiliki pakain saja ketika pindah.dia bisa membuat orang tuanya memiliki job samping seperti peneliti sihir, ahli elixir, atau hanya sekedar job bangsawan yang mengatur bisnis mc, dengan itu mc akan memiliki orang yang bisa dipercaya, novel ini bukan hanya mc saja yang pindah kedunia game !!dibebera bab dia mengatakan para pemain sudah mulai membuat faksi namun dia memberikan informasi secara bebas ke forum yang bisa dilihat oleh semua orang.Jika latar belakang cerita ini mengangkat panji peradaban Bumi dan berperang melawan kekuatan mengerikan dari Dunia Lain, saya akan mendukung tindakan mc menyebarkan informasi secara bebas seperti ini, namun novel ini tidak.dan banyak lagi kekesalan saya saat membaca novel, anda bisa membacanya sendiri.
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The translation quality really lets this magnificent story down (e.g. terms being left in pinyin frustrates me - as i don't know whether the translator is doing that because he is lazy or he is simply oblivious).I recommend the translator spending the time and putting in some effort to go back from the beginning and edit some of the terms used so the story can flow better and provide an overall better experience for the reader.
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Translation quality its very bad......................................................................................................................................................................
Let's disregard the propaganda elements of this novel, and talk about the elephant in the room: character design.The protagonist is a robot. He has no feelings, emotions, or beliefs of his own. Events happen, and the MC reacts to them. People approach the MC, he replies back. The protagonist doesn't even move of his own accord! Everything he does is a mission, the only difference is who the mission is being issued by. Sometimes it's from the government, other times it's from the system. A shounen protagonist is more three-dimensional than this idiot.
So obviously a of negative comments, but the story isn't bad overall. It has good progression but author could explain some things a little better. Biggest downfall, is in the later chapters author just reuses/rewords the same action the MC/other characters do. Still ongoing and from what I've seen on other sites, it's pretty much the same thing. So not sure if author is having a hard time creating material or if it's just so that they can reach minimum words for each chapter. Honestly that's the biggest headache, reading the same thing 3-4 times throughout the chapter and in the end they've only done like 3 actual things throughout it. If it's a creativity issue then my recommendation is to just slow down on number of chapters per week. If it's cause they wanna be lazy and just use the excess as a filler to complete the chapter, then the readers that have made it to the later chapters will likely stop reading as well. Anyway, hope that bit gets changed but other than that I like the story so far
First of all, wait until you read at least five chapters before forming an opinion. The first two chapters are quite small and ordinary, but the story quality gives a super jump (and I mean it) after the third one. The author increased the amount written after the third chapter as well. What really caught my attention is the MC and how the world thinks about the wisp, and I've never seen a wisp MC before. Another excellent point in this story is the MC cheat. This one was very well thought, and really well elaborated.
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I read a bit of the raws. Perhaps one of the most relaxing reads I've read. The Author keeps it respectful. He writes fun characters like Uncle Zhang with the comedy-relief Animals. Yes, you might have read a lot of Streaming novels but I've noticed that only few get it right. The 'Streaming Comments' is what makes this Novel so fun. (I thought they'd be annoying and pointlessly ruin this novel) I was wrong. If only we had more POVs or stronger roles to them...I hope this gets translated to motivate the Author's long break.
it's the twice royal ships and jenlisa and chaesoo. not to mention seulrene too!