the story is good and interesting but grammar and writing sucks so if you wanna read be ready to lose a few of your brain cells. To be honest I'm very tempted to edit and repost this novel but I don't know how the author will react?
it's pretty cool I would like to have the real name of the novel please ..............................................................................
I like this story the MC is really a hard working to be the strongest I hope to see more of his progress and also I want to see abbadon atleast in the next more chappy..
I have not read anything, but ayy my fav linux as cover. I will give you about 4 stars just to get the ball rolling. As for writing another thing. I love the yellow thing on the logo. Kali linux is "cyber security OS" which is used to "prevent" the attacks and used for "ethical" hacking.
Its lit my dude, definitely worth the read and it's literally the best book I've ever read! I love all the bs and effort that goes into the book. It's like a love child between eastern novels, western dark humor, and my favorite low level mob all neatly blended together into an addiction I should probs get checked out. #Halfi4DaWin #RekSh1t ❤❤❤❤ 4 u my dude
Author here, this is my first time writing a novel of any type. hope you all enjoy!zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Love the story and has alot of potential . Author reads the comments and always looking for ways to improve.This could turn out to be the best novel you will read in your life.
It started out very good but around chapter 80 the story just gets nonsensical and directionless. There is no goal or reason for the things that the MC does. He for example helps some human because that human has heard of a legend that MAYBE there is a way to help is parents and for that reason alone he goes on a suicide and the MC who doesn't even know the guy or has any connection and has way more important things to do during that time, for no reason suddenly decides to risk everything and follows and carries that guy and constantly risks his life just so they can go to even more dangerous areas of a pocked dimension.
Why bother posting the story here if you didn't even bother translating it or fixing it's grammar. Also it bothers me that you didn't even credited the original author or atleast in the description mentioned the link for the original.
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