Nice story broJust started reading and yeah it’s well written and has a rather unique story so I’ll definitely stick to this for now :) Keep it up
I read till chapter 44 and I had to drop this garbage. The MC has no personality. He has just been acting arrogantly from the start. He got even more arrogant the further I read. Any male character is an automatic bastard, Only fallen females are 'good' and all of them are helpless damsels in need of the MC to save them. Also the plot, it does not feels like we are moving toward anything, with the main character being the facilitator of that movement. The MC is passive, the plot just drags him along and make him act according to it (and we all know who is behind the plot)Most of all, is the fact that the MC is turning into one of those cringe chinese protagonists with hidden plans. He's going around and trying to defy everybody's expectations of him, even when there is no real reason to. But as I said, it is the plot that drags the MC, not the other way around. The idea was good, but the one behind it failed to measure up their idea. And with a story like this, how come all but one sing praises for an obvious low tier work?
Parfait ce livre je recommande vivement
I love where this is going so far. Keep up the good work and give us the juice already☺️☺️☺️
Your characters' dialogue feels so natural and authentic
The structures of the sentences is pretty bad, in a later chapter idk I did an expample.The story could be good, but as I said the structure of the sentences is so bad it ruins the flow of the story. Some grammar mistakes here and there.Story nothing new, but till now havent seen any story which has done a good job at writing such a story,pretty sad
It’s really an interesting start. She finally reached her first goal and the base for the coming storyline is prepared well. I hope it gets continued like that.Will continue reading. Count me intrigued for the future.
"No, now what you should do is go to the far place from this country. Don't ever, ever come back here because these creatures are very strong in this country. So you have to leave and don't come back."
"How did she have that much strength!?" *Gerand*
"I'll let you go but for a price" he said still looking at patients.
"what happen to you its been a years do you have someone special or..."
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