Review when only 20 chapters published: not bad. So far nothing wrong with translation / Mc isn't stupid. I don't expect anything unique though.
It's a worse version of "I Can Create Perfect Accidents." Even that novel is subpar but this novel? It sucks.Identical concept with the only real difference between the two being the main character here is a lot more decisive in his actions. The pacing is also faster but that comes with the cost of no real depth or actual background. Keep in mind I skimmed eleven chapters so maybe I missed certain things.Overall, 1.8/5 stars. I'm being generous since this is a blatant plagiarism and the new author wrote an even worse story.
100th comment, congrats author..........
if you dislike grammatical errors you should stay away from this novel. The general idea isn't bad tho, having a system take over the body for example is something new which I appreciate.
Seems Promising! Hopefully it gets Picked.
Simply impeccable. This is one of those novels that give you hope for the entire web novel medium. While this is not a new genre by far, the level of quality across the board makes this one of the most interesting and addictive works I've ever read. Not to be dramatic, but New Eden is one of those books that make you feel like you've been blessed from the gods of literacy themselves. If you don't check out this masterpiece, you might as well tear out your eyes because obviously you don't deserve them. ??u200d♂️
from the first twenty chapters, it clear that not much planning went into writing this. the MC gets a second chance goes three years back in time. he was a professional gamer yet he is rattled by the death of an npc, which doesn't make sense. there is no mention of using his future knowledge to gain an advantage. there isn't much depth to characters yet. his reincarnation is brushed past and the MC doesn't react much to it. not much world building and background to speak of. on the other hand, the translation quality is great and the writing is very fluid.all in all, a somewhat generic but fun read for when you have nothing to do.
The VRMMO is terribly designed. It has the most bare bones framework but nothing past it. It's hard to gauge the difficulty of fights as we have no clue how much HP the monster has or how much DMG MC (or anyone else, really) does. At best we get some vague **** like 'boss has tons of hp' and 'MC deals hills of dmg'. Stats are just numbers and they play little role besides 'he added points in agility now he's faster'. It's just too vague to be appreciated. Leveling curve is kind of nonsense to be honest, but, whatever, it's a power-fantasy VRMMO, it's not like you can expect any better. female characters in this novel are insufferable There's not a single decent female character in the novel. Every few chapters, new chick gets introduced and I just want to punch them all in the face. Perhaps the worst point is that the MC just goes along with their insanity. Our mc just does whatever people want because he is an, ”good person”. Writing style is... not that great. Excessive repetition, empty paragraphs of nothingness, very, very vague fights (MC dodged, he attack, he dodged them all easily, bam they're all dead). There's occasional fight with more detail, but not by a large margin. Even the very first BOSS fight is basically 'MC discovered the flaw, MC dodges, MC strikes, MC kills, the end'.
Fairly average novel, nothing really unique or outstanding about it so far. On top of that, I especially dislike the fact that the translators are soliciting 4-5 star reviews in exchange for additional chapters. It just seems dishonest and manipulative, and I don't really feel like supporting that kind of behaviour.Maybe in the future, if the novel starts to diverge from it's cliched and frankly quite boring story; and if the translators stop trying to manipulate the reviews, I will come back and increase my rating, but as it is at the moment I can't really endorse this novel.** I would like to point out that I have no problem with translators asking people to give powerstones in exchange for extra chapters, as many other translators do so and in the end, if they are able to persuade anyone with this method then it's a testament as to how much people enjoy the story anyway, and is therefore not undeserved.
just another trash racist novel courtesy of some of china's low life's. not worth your time. *************†********††‡‡‡‡‡‡‡‡‡‡”_:"+$+$;$;$+±_;$+$(_;
Thanks for pickup this novel. Please pick more female protagonist novel. this novel has comedy, adventure tags remind me of side character which is my cup of tea. love this novel
Please continue the story, its extremely well writen. Theres no others books like this one..................................................?????.