I don't usually write a review when the story is still in the beginning, but it made me want to follow. There are certain grammatical errors but nothing that gets in the way of reading and the plot is very well done, I want to read more so keep up the good work!
the story is great and very entertaining. it has a strong "Lord of the mysteries" vibe so if you are a fan, this book will be right in your alley. characters are well designed and not shallow. Plot is well thought and complex. The only con is the English which is not perfect, otherwise this would deserve a 5/5.
Good story. I really enjoyed the sequence of events in this book. They are coherent and the author did a good job. The characters have character and personality. The description is very vivid and interesting.
Hey, got to say that this is a good novel. However, I noticed that there are some inconsistency. For example, the MC contradicting himself (chapter 24). Another example, MC's first meeting with the novel's original MC. The interaction ended awkwardly and were a bit abrupt with the MC's response. Other than a few bits and nitpicking those, the overall story is interesting and have a sense of story flow. Also, a last bit of advice to improve the story is by making a story map. The story map doesn't need to be fully or well made, the story map must be able to guide the story direction. That's it for this review.
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Ugh.. this novel is a rather poor all-rounder. I didn't like anything in it. It's one of these novels that doesn't give you any impression and you forget about it after a couple of days.
I hope that it is good and the.master is always stronger than his disicple and that he gets stronger and stronger likr hehehe that and becomes one of the strongest if not the strongest at the end :) plz this will be good I know but not the best I ever saw lol when I heard breakthrough before death hehehe!
Anyone have the RAW's Name for this Book?Hope this Book gets selected.. But I like the Plant MC more..This Book comes Second.. and Doomsday comes Third for its idea of useing "Luck"..For this book I hope MC purely cultivates himself.. since he is Old and should understand Human Greed and Nature.. so, Hopefully no Kindness/ Loli/ Old man Herrem
Another copy-paste novel not sure whether i should read this or not.......?
please update more chapters wanna read more chapters
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The narration of the story is beautifully done. The description of each character was well written. The development of the story and the background formation is smooth. Definitely one of the gems here at WN. Keep up the good work.